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He was happy till she waked pass.
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 Created on 7-16-08
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He was happy till she waked pass.
He should have smiled because he got to see her again, but instead he frowned and tears filled his eyes. She was the girl who broke his heart, she was the girl he loved, and she was the girl he couldn’t have.
She said she loved him, she said she’ll always be there – but it was all just a lie. She walked away even though she knew how much he cared, she was a fool, she made a mistake, and now it was fare to late.
She was living and having fun till she got hurt and she feel all depressed, but this time she didn’t have him there. He couldn’t hold her tell her everything will be aright, he couldn’t be a comfort; he couldn’t even try and help - like he always did in the past.
She made a mistake and now she’s regrets it; and he will not forgive.
So they walk pass each other at school pretending they never knew each other, pretending they don’t love each other.
She was a fool for making such a mistake, but now his being a fool for not forgiving her.
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Please Login to post comments| On August 22nd 2008 OpenDay Said : | |
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KEWL |
| On August 8th 2008 MissCheerCap Said : | |
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tear |
| On July 17th 2008 XoLOLAXo Said : | |
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i like it...kmpp! |
| On July 17th 2008 justjetjustis Said : | |
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people like it yay ill go write more now ^^ |
| On July 16th 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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I like it, plz kmp! |
| On July 16th 2008 mysterywhateve Said : | |
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Wow that's deep I like it! |
| On July 16th 2008 futureguy95 Said : | |
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kmp if there is more |
| On July 16th 2008 tiarenee08 Said : | |
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i hope theres more kmp |
| On July 16th 2008 lolli2duble0h8 Said : | |
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great story ...has me in tears....very true for mylself at the moment and reading this i realise how stupid i have been ... thanks ...kmp if theires more |
| On July 16th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Wow interesting. Please continue. :) |
