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Creative Created on 6-27-08 Views(97) Story Rating G

I didn’t steal it !” Dough said for what he thought must have been the hundredth time that night. He was used to having to repeat himself in order to be heard, but this was ridiculous.

He looked to Jay-den for support, but for the first time that he could remember, didn’t find it. Instead his face was a mixture of confusion and disappointment.

“Alikely story.” said Sony “Give it here!” Dough held the gold out at arm’s length. “That’s what I came here to do” he said, but he knew what already the woman was no longer listening to him.

“I told you it was him.” said Sony

“I didn’t st-”

“That’s enough, Dough, Sony.” said jay-den, cutting off both of them, before they could renew their game of accusation and denial. “May I please see the gold?” “Sure here you go Jay-den” Jay-den laughed for the first time that week “its fake”

“What ? The gold is fake” Sony says in disappointment

“ That’s enough fights, there is only three of use; we got a job to do- we must find this so called Mike as Ulmodho insisted” Jay-den said rasing his voice to make sure everyone was listening.

“I apologies” dough said shamefully

“Me to” added Sony

 

The night was long and cold they had to find shelter before the sun went down, and before the night breeze began.

 

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