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The walk

There was thia man about 20 years old, conflicted with childhood troubles and a sever lack of counceiling and an acholhol probelm mike was walking home one day after him and his girlfriend had just broke up!

Mike was to depressed to cry in fact smiled as he walked he figured this was was no good for him so as he was walking past a house party he decide to do one of the most hanus acts of crime in us history he would imitate bundy gacy and dohmer as his fanticys coliided he picked up one girl after another and brought them in the back yard strangling them to death and taking a tooth from each of his victums as evryone was only aware of him hooking up with them he was actully killing them!

after a while went by michael stoped and told evryone he had dragged all those girld into the back b/c they had passed out and were taking up to much room at his house party...the drunkin guest belived that this was true and it was his party so they did not argue!

Michael walked hom and stayed in his room for a month and let the heat around the areacalm down he grew a beard and changed his wardrobe finally after a year they lost leads and the case died out! a couple ppl tried to confess for publicity but michael was getting angry at these ppl and weent to go confess him self.As he was walking to the precinct he was struck by a vehicle and was blown into a coma after a month or to mikes family was about to take him off of life sooport when he finnaly awoken from his sleep he said that he meet god and that he killed those poor ppl at the party and he was sorry...they said he was dillutional and they they cought the "Party crasher" at this time michael pulled a braclet out of his pocket and showed his mother th teeth that he had teaken from his victums some still with some of the gum attached!

Michaels mother loved him so much she said "Mike i love you, and i would never want you to suffer"...

she had smothered michael to death with one of his childhood pillows his grand mother gave him. And said "You will suffer no more"

""The E.K.G machine now has a defining tone iroonicly like mikes personality""

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