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Abuse006

Creative Created on 8-11-08 Views(155) Story Rating PG

"Where are we going? Adam where are we going?"  He just turned to me and smiled.  It was a bright and sunny day, just perfect.  We were walking across a field filled with flowers.  "So beautiful..."I mumbled. We stopped walking.  I looked at Adam, he was still smiling that breath taking smile of his. "It's time Jordan."  "What do you mean?"  Adam started backing away slowly, not taking his eyes off of me.  "Goodbye." he said as he turned around and started walking the other way.  Then, it became dark, very dark.  "NO! ADAM YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME!" I cried. No response.  I tried searching for him, everywhere I could, but the problem was..I just couldn't see.  I started crying and fell to the ground.  How could he leave me like this?  Why?! WHY?! I screamed into the darkness, even though no one could hear me.  The next thing that  happened was something I did not expect, a shock of electricity hit my heart.  What the-? Another shock.

"Jordan you stay with me!"  Adam? I thought he had left me?  I tried to call out for him, to tell him I was there, but I couldn't, my mouth wouldn't open.  Something was wrong.  Another shock.  

"It's working..." Adam what's working? Uhhhh why couldn't I speak to him.  Another shock, but this time I heard a beeping noise, not a fast one, but a slow steady noise.  My lungs were suddenly plunged with air and my chest rose.  The feeling of my body came back to me and I began to slowly open my eyes..

There he was leaning over me, a pained expression on his face.  I smiled.  

"I thought you had left me.."I said.

"Why would I ever leave you Jordan, seeing you get stabbed made me realize how much I need you and care for you..."  It all came back to me now.  I remembered my dad and Adam fighting, the knife going through my shirt and deep into my skin.  I flinched.

"It's ok now, everythings fine." Adam reassured as he put his arms around me.  And for once in my life I felt safe and I knew everything was going to be alright.

 

 

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On September 6th 2008 greenytoo Said :
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On August 11th 2008 toni2006 Said :
toni2006 i love it this is a great story you don't have to keep me posted anymore i'm subscribed
On August 11th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess yay! i knew what was happening since the whole shock to the heart thing. this story is good but im wonder ing how ur going to end it
On August 11th 2008 upyours911 Said :
upyours911 I really like this story =), and u dont have to keep me posted anymore I subcribed!
On August 11th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 wow I like this storie