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Abuse005

Creative Created on 8-9-08 Views(144) Story Rating PG13

"RUN!!!" I screamed at Adam.  Oh please don't let my dad hurt him...please !!!

My dad smacked me across the face, then got up.  I watched in horror as he walked slowly, knife down near his waist, twoards Adam.  I'm pretty sure I wasn't breathing and my heart had stopped.

"I'm going to have to ask you to leave..."my dad said in an angry voice.

"Not without Jordan, I can't do that sir."

Wrong answer.  My dad leaped onto Adam, knocking him to the floor.  But Adam threw the first punch, which landed straight at my dads nose.  I'm pretty sure it was broken.  My dad didn't like that at all, he punched Adam right at his jaw.  I could hear Adam groan. 

What do I do?!! I have to help him!

I pulled my shirt back over myself and hopped up.  My plan was simple get the glass jar on my desk and hit my dad over the head with it.  Simple.  I tried to go as fast as I could as I put the jar in my right hand and swung.  It landed right ontop of my dads head.  

But nothing happened. He didn't even flinch, or fall to the ground like I was planning for him too.

Shit....

Before I knew what was going on, my dad had slammed me into the wall.  I saw Adam jump up and rush over to my dad, but it was too late.  The knife slowly made its way into my stomache...

"NOOO!!!"

I fell to the floor, knife still in me.  Everything started to get blurry...I couldn't understand what was going on.  What was Adam doing?  Did my dad leap at him? 

"Plea-s-se sto-o-op.."I gasped and darkness surrounded me.

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On September 6th 2008 greenytoo Said :
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OMG!!!
On August 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess i hope she's okay. wow, the scene got ugly real quick! please keep me posted!!!!
On August 10th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said :
CraziiChick208 omgg please dont let her die!
kmpp!
On August 10th 2008 toni2006 Said :
toni2006 omg i hope she doesn't die can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter
On August 10th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 wow