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Rated: PG 13
A small child gets out of his bed. He walks down the eerie hall to the bathroom. He hears a crash in another room and a person screaming."Help!!!!!" the voice screams. He runs to see what the calamity is about. A large horned creature is choking a woman. The boy cries out "let go of my mommy” he then sobs in a corner. The creature twists the woman’s head off. Blood seeping into every crack in the floor. The boy cries some more. The creature speaks "dumb mortal". It then flays out an open window. Soon after police cars come to the scene. The boy still crying looks out the window. A large man busts through the door. "Son what happened" he calls out. "A demon!!!!!!!!" the boy screams and runs out the open door. A skinny tall police man grabs him. "Son you are going to have to calm down" he calmly speaks. "My mommy..." the kid cries out.
10 years later.
The child who endured that endured that ordeal talked to his doctor "Mr.Lackle... We can only help you so much" the man in the white coat spoke. "Doc it killed my mom” he calmly said. "Son are you sure you saw a "demon”?” he said. "It had long red horns and a sadistic glee on its face” the grown child spoke. "Take this” the doctor handed him a bottle. "It well helps you with the night terrors". The grown child looked at the bottle and read "David Lackle: take only 3 a day”.” thank you sir" the grown boy said.
David returned home and lay on his bed. He thought "what the hell was that doctor talking about... he didn't see what I saw". A car parked into the drive way. Suddenly he heard the door open and a loud man yell "hey David you home?” Yah James I am home. James was David's foster father although he didn't like him he had to live with him. David then fell asleep.
Blood filling the floor in a puddle David opened his eyes. Souls screaming for their very lives. Blood flooding the basement floor. David slips and falls into the pool of blood.
He falls out of bed covered in blood. The blood drenched his green tank top. He ran to the bathroom and looked at him self in the mirror. Behind him he saw James looking at the back of his head. "Boy what did you do... pick your nose to much?" David touched his nose crusted blood was around it. David wiped it off and went back to bed.
He awoke later to screams "What the hell are you doing in my house" James yelled. Then there was a loud thud. David got up to check out what he just heard. He opened a door there stood James hung by his own organs. David looked away and giggled.
David awoke in a daze. He got up and checked on his foster father. Sound asleep with a knife in his hand. David found a knife on the floor and he picked it up. He saw his vision once more and made it a reality cutting up his foster father who he hated. James almost killed him plenty of times and David finally got his revenge. A dead James hung from his own organs David called the cops and said in laughter "the demon came back but, now we are buddies and he killed my foster father"
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| On April 29th 2007 jonlovesashley Said : | |
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thnx |
| On April 29th 2007 TinTin734 Said : | |
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BITCHIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On April 29th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said : | |
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it's pretty good, you need to work on details a little bit and it could be a great story!!! i really like the plot though, great job |
| On April 29th 2007 lestatinator Said : | |
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lol, i agree with vampirinsic, THAT FUCKIN ROCKED!!! MAN!!! U ROCK ASS MY BRO!!!! |
| On April 29th 2007 vampirinsic Said : | |
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u didn't lie... IT IS A FUCKIN ROCKIN SOX OFF KINDA STORY!!! i luveded it... |
| On April 29th 2007 HEARTcorexEmo Said : | |
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I like it. Keep up the good work ;] |
| On April 29th 2007 jonlovesashley Said : | |
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thank you! |
| On April 29th 2007 xrockdrummerx Said : | |
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it IS prty good. |
| On April 28th 2007 jonlovesashley Said : | |
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thank you ^_^ |
| On April 28th 2007 IAmButAMystery Said : | |
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Woa haha this is good. Really good. |


