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Watching Over You (Intro)

Authors Comments: This is only the intro. I want to make sure that there are quite a few people actually interested in reading before I post more.
Creative Created on 8-26-08 Views(186) Story Rating G

 

            Colin Jefferson blinked open his eyes. All he saw was white, so he closed them and reopened them, but once again all he saw was white. He looked down at his body and saw that he was wearing a white robe, with tan sandals.

            “Whoa, this is weird,” he said aloud. “What happened and where am I?”

            Colin blinked as a man in a white toga suddenly appeared before him. “You are Colin Benjamin Jefferson, correct?” he asked in a monotone voice. Colin just nodded his head, as his mind was still processing what was going on. “My name is Manny, and I am your Mentor.”

            “Wait a minute, you’re my mentor? For what?”

            Manny let out a sigh of frustration. “Kid, look around. Everything here is white, and I’m dressed in a toga. What is the last thing you remember before being here?”

            Colin tried hard to think of the last thing he saw before being there. “All I remember was the car crash. Do you mean that I’m,” he said trailing off.

            “Yes, I’m sorry son, but you’re dead.”

            “I can’t be dead! I need to be alive. Jenny still needs me!” Colin said hyperventilating.

            “Just calm down kid. That’s why I’m your mentor. I’m here to teach all there is to know about being a guardian angel,” Manny said placing a hand on his back.

            “I’m a guardian angel? So I can still watch over Jenny, right?”

            “Yes, you can still watch over Jenny. You know her the best, and she needs you now more than ever.”

 

 

i know that this was short, but it WAS only the intro. I promise that if I write more, the chapters will definitely be longer. I just want to make sure people acutally want to read this though. Also, I think that you should all check out Avder's story "Supernatural Revenge". It is a very good one, and I recommend it!

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On August 27th 2008 Artemisseven Said :
Artemisseven Hm. I like it.
On August 26th 2008 lovin5life Said :
lovin5life Sounds really good so far
On August 26th 2008 xxixlovexyouxx Said :
xxixlovexyouxx I like it (:
please keep on postin more. !
On August 26th 2008 avder Said :
avder I really like it so far. Thanks for giving my story a shoutout. Next chapter to that should be ready in a couple days(Ughh, school)!!!!
On August 26th 2008 DaisieeDoll Said :
DaisieeDoll Thats really good, I think you should tell us more about how the character feels and about how they say things, but its a really good idea, please write more! I'll subscribe :)
On August 26th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :
CRISSY10012 this is gonna be so good, i want more lol
On August 26th 2008 getsilly17 Said :
getsilly17 I can see good come out of this. kmp pls