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When Monday came Janie was so exited to see Jim. She ran up behind him and gave him a hug and peck on the cheek. Jim had a surprised look on his face and asked, ‘ what was that for?’
Janie gave him like a disappointed look.
‘ring’ ‘ring’- goes the bell
Jim told Janie bye and that he would she her after school. As Janie sat in bio class all she could think about was if Jim even remembered, or if he was just playing around. At the end of the day Janie walked up to Jim, and asked, ‘ was this weekend good for you?’
‘What are you talking about ? I was at the hospital all weekend with my parents’, Jim explained
Janie whispered to him that they when all the way, she was hoping that maybe he just forgot.
‘Janie I don’t know who you went all the way with, but it wasn’t me’, Jim said in an intimidating voice
Janie didn’t understand what was happening, she didn’t know why Jim would say something life that..
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| On March 13th 2008 muazm Said : | |
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whoa,kmp!! |
| On February 11th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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didn't see that coming! kmp it is getting pretty good |
| On February 11th 2008 jasperman237 Said : | |
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is there going to be more of these? |


