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 Created on 2-8-08
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As Janie hopped in Jim's car, she saw something different about him, but she couldn't put her finger on it. ''So where are we going'', Janie asked. ''Its a surprise', Jim said. As the car came to a stop, Janie noticed a bundle of lighted up candles in the shape of a heart. Insided the hear was a blanked and some punch. As they were sitting down,Jim wrapped his arm around Janie, and said'' I LOVE YOU'',i a low soft voice. Janie knew then and there that the time was right for them to go all the way. As Jim moved on top of Janie, he stoped ,and said'' Janie are you sure you want to do this?'' ''Yes'', Janie said. About two hours later Jim dropped Janie of at her house, they said their goodnight's and i love you's. As Janie walked into the house, she wondered if that would be the last time she spoke to Jim, since she had given 'it' up...
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Please Login to post comments| On February 11th 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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once again it is a bit short but still good |
| On February 11th 2008 jasperman237 Said : | |
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one or two of the words are misspelled but, its still great |
| On February 11th 2008 jasperman237 Said : | |
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i like this one.. too |
