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I Caint Get Away *10*Authors Comments: Sry it took so long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope like it
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 Created on 9-9-08
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So that night, Ericah had to make sure she was like, extra fresh and Erics eyes were only on her. So she jumped in the shower at about 5:10 and by the time she did that, brushed her teeth and all that good stuff, it was 5:40. She had exactly 1 hour and 20 minutes so she went and freshened up and brushed her silky brown hair into a soft ponytail but she still had nothing to wear so she walked over to the closet and the first thing she saw was this orange and silver strapless tank, and a sorta kinda knee-lenght skirt and decided to wear it. she slipped into her orange and white one's(shoes). She looked in the mirror and realized that yea she looked hot, but her lips wear chapped so she ran over to her lipgloss and put some on but not to much to the fact that it looked like chicken grease.
7:00pm
The door bell rang and Ericah went to answer it and saw Eric standing lookin so good, she almost fainted.
Eric- Hey Ericah, you look goooood ( he said not even looking up, the whole time he was starin her body)
Ericah-I gotta admit, you do to Eric
Eric- so you ready
Ericah- yea but where we going, you still aint tell me
Eric- im gone take you where ever you like
Ericah- okay well since its our first date lets just go to the movies or somethin
Eric-aight lets go
In the Car
Eric- so what you want to see
Ericah- i dont know, lets see a scary movie like... Mirrors
Eric- okay well if thats what you want
At the Movies
It was already 7:28 and the next show was at 8:00 so they had to kill time by just sitting outside the theater
Ericah- so tell me about you
Eric- well, i was born in Washigton, but my mom got a job offer out here in about 06' and then me, her and my brother moved to this townhouse in Newyork City and lived there, but we had a brake- in at our house so thats why we moved to Bronxs. My daddy split when I was about 4 yrs. old and for a long time after that, my mother was real depressed and settled for anything but after a while she got her self in check. And sometimes i feel like, damn, what was so bad or so wrong with me that he couldn't love me like i loved him?
Ericah-man aint nothin wrong with you, he was trippin and he must have been a fool to not love you, i mean look at you, when I look at you I a see a man that can take care of his. You have all the things the complement the word "love." Your smile, your passion, your words, i mean see all of this when I see you.
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Please Login to post comments| On September 22nd 2008 Koraney Said : | |
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Dis is sooooooo good CANNOT wait till da nxt one lol |
| On September 16th 2008 PorshaS Said : | |
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really good kmp |
| On September 13th 2008 AndiKHF Said : | |
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write more dumb azz lol..............snap
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| On September 13th 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said : | |
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LOVE IT CAINT WAIT TILL THE NEXT PART AND I ALSO SUBSCRIBED |
| On September 11th 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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i like and u aint gotta keep me posted cuz i subscribed =] |
| On September 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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so basically she just told him that she loved him! lol cant wait to hear his response =] |
| On September 10th 2008 jessi9509runit Said : | |
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I Hope Yall Like It |
