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Creative Created on 7-27-08 Views(149) Story Rating PG13

By the time Ericah got back, Beonca was sitting on the couch by the drinks as if she never left.

Ericah- thanks B for watchin' my drink

Beonca-of course girl, i wouldnt want someone to put something in it, now would i

Ericah- haha watever

Ericah swallowed down the rest of her drink and about 5 minutes later it hit her.....Ericah becane extremely dizzy and felt as if she had about 10 drinks

Ericah- maybe we should go home, i dont feel to good

Beoca- girl just have fun and dance

Ericah- but i feel sick, kinda drunk

Beonca- but you only had one thing to drink, and that was fruit punch

Ericah- i know but maybe somebody put something in it

Beonca- aint nobody put nothin in yo drink, stop trippin

Ericah- okay watever

Later That Night (2:13)

Ericah woke up in a bedroom she had never seen before and didnt know how she got ther. All she remeber was  the smell of achoholand someone much stronger than her pressing up agianst her skin....... she finally got her clothes together and walked downstairs and only John( the host of the party) was down there with David and Charles( boys around the neighborhood).

John- wat u doin here, i thought evverybody left

Before Ericah could answer she heard David wisper to John....

David- na man, let her stay, she hella sexy

Ericah let out a small laugh and finally said....

Ericah- i guess i fell asleep, can you take me home

John- aiight c'mon

The ride was once agian quick so it was quiet on the  way. when they pulled up to Ericah's house, John got out and opened her door and she thanked him as she snuck in the house hoping her father was asleep.

When Ericah got to her room she went straight to sleep and woke up at about 10 am the next day.. she walked to the sower and took a good shower for about an hour trying to wash away what happened yesterday. Once she got out the shower, she walked to her room a quick threw on some round the house shorts and a beater. She went to the kitchen and ate a bowl of cereal and decided to take a walk....enterupting her walk, she ran into Eric

Eric was in his one lil world listening to his i pod mouthin the words to "Please Excuse My Hands" by Plies.... once he got closer to Erich he finally looked up and realized it was her

Ericah- hey wats happenin

Eric- Wasup shawty, wat u doin over here

Ericah- i live right up the street on 73rd and King

Eric- you serious, i live down on 69th

Ericah- why i aint' seen you over here

Eric- well me and my moms just moved up here about a week ago, before i met you at the mall

Ericah- aw  ok cool

Eric- so wat you doin later....

Ericah just loved the way Eric talked and everything , he didnt have an accent but just his face and bone structer, with his perfect white teeth,even though she didnt really know him she really wanted to get to know him (he was perfect) she thought.....

Ericah- nothin, wat about you

Eric- well i was hoping we could get togethe, you know, like a date

Ericah- i would love that

Eric- okay i'll pick you up at about 7 tonight

Ericah-alright

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On August 1st 2008 AndiKHF Said :
AndiKHF GOOD KMP
On July 31st 2008 bowzlady1 Said :
bowzlady1 i loved it. kinda reminda me of dat episode of degrassi Luv dat show. && damn now dat i mention it, i hope she dont catch nuffin 4rm dat dude.
On July 30th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS real good kmp i like it!!!
On July 29th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 kmpp!
On July 29th 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said :
UPTmrscarter93 I LUV IT CANT WAIT 4 DA NEXT PART KMPP
On July 28th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess its ook i wish i knew what happened at the party, but i think its going to get ALOT better. PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!!!!!!
On July 28th 2008 Koraney Said :
Koraney dis is GREAT plz kmp
On July 27th 2008 oxXxlovelyxXxo Said :
oxXxlovelyxXxo it's good. kmpp. :-)
On July 27th 2008 jessi9509runit Said :
jessi9509runit i hope yall like it