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I Caint' Get Away

Creative Created on 6-27-08 Views(185) Story Rating G

9:45p.m

After that long night, Ericah just wanted to lay in her bed and go to sleep but she was starved so she went in the kitchen  and saw her father sitting on the couch making out with some woman she had never seen before!

Ericah- Ugh! Dad stop!!!

Mr. fuller- oh, um darling this is Claire, I met her at the bookstore up the street...were dating

Ericah- well next take your liite friend into yo' room, i dont want to seee that

Mr. Fuller- Im sure your mother would've wanted me to start dating, i'm happy so you should be too

Claire- oh its okay David you don't have to explain yourself to this child!.!.

Ericah- look, om not trying to be rude but please stay out of this, this is my father and you really have nothing to do with our conversation

Claire- yea..well...well...watever, im not going to stand here and argue with a child(she said crossing her arms like she was all that)

Ericah- ok thats fine,(and walked away)

Mr.Fuller- look honey, I know shes a little.. you know, about me dating but its just a phase it will be okay

Ckaire- I hope so, nut anyway i need to go, i am working a late shift tonight

Mr.Fuller-alright, i guess i will talk to you tomorrow

Claire- ok, bye

~The Next Day~

Aroura and Ericah were planning to go shopping just to go and get new clothes and ust hang out,you know, what most girls do to have fun!

Ericah jumped in the shower and by the time she got out, her sister was already ready

Aroura- you gotta hurry up, th mall closes in less than 5 hours and you know how I shop!!

Ericah- okay, okay give me 15 minutes

Aroura- okay, Ill be waiting outside

Ericah had to look good because she knew that there would be some fine boys, and she wanted to look her best so she put on some fresh white and red nike's with a new akdemics(clothing line) skirt  that stoped right at her knee and a akdemics red shirt that went perfect with her shoes. She had her long brown hair down her back and she had hoop earings that said "Ericah" with a matching necklace.

Ericah- Damn!!! you look good Ericah, i would kiss you!(she said looking in the mirror)

Aroura- alright c'mon i'm ready to go!

Ericah- alright, lets go girl

~At The Oakside Mall~ (4:01)

Aroura and Ericah had been in three stoe=res so far, "Deb";"Rave"; and "Footlocker".

Ericah- girl im hungry, lets go to the food court, I heard they just opened a McDonalds!

Aroura- Ok

at the food court Aroura and Ericah both spotted different boys, the one that Ericah was lookind at way about her age, he had that swagg you know, the fresh hair cut with the beater(tank top for boys) and the basket ball shorts, man her sexy!!

Ericah noticed the biy looking at her and all of a sudden he stared to walk up to her and said

Boy-Ay shawty can i halla' at you for a minute

Ericah-(at first Ericah could'nt speack just because she thought he was so sexy! She loved the way he looked at the fact that while he was talking his earring was just bling and ohh his perfect dmille and his cologne oh my god he smelled so good.) yea my name is Ericah wat about you?

Boy- im Eric and uh, i noticed that you noticed me

Eircah- how you know i was'nt looking past you

Eric- trust me, you caint' possibly look past this

Ericah- ye wtever

Eric- so, can i get yo number?

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On July 3rd 2008 mrsdh Said :
mrsdh good job jessica
On July 1st 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess this is really good nd funny how its ericah and eric. there almost da same
On July 1st 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 i love all den stores dey went to lol btw it was good!
On June 30th 2008 cheerleader725 Said :
cheerleader725 really goood KMPP!!!!
On June 30th 2008 coreyswifey88 Said :
coreyswifey88 really good i like it kmpp
On June 29th 2008 mrsdh Said :
mrsdh i like it
On June 28th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS good kmp
On June 28th 2008 bowzlady1 Said :
bowzlady1 ooo Get it GuuuRRl. Lolz. KMP!
On June 28th 2008 AndiKHF Said :
AndiKHF YEA RIGHT
On June 28th 2008 jessi9509runit Said :
jessi9509runit Sorry about all of the errors ill do better on the next chapter
On June 28th 2008 AndiKHF Said :
AndiKHF WHY DID U STOP
On June 28th 2008 Koraney Said :
Koraney gurl dis is fresh plz keep me posted luvin ur story =-)
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oxXxlovelyxXxo nice. kmpp. :-)