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 Created on 6-13-08
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Aroura and Ericah sat down knowing something was wrong.
Aroura- Is mom okay, where is she?
Mr. Fuller- That was Bronx police just on the phone and they said that Jessica(Mrs. Fuller), was just in a car accident and sped off the highway....
Ericah sat and looked at her father in disbelief, she did'nt know what to say.
Aroura- Tears started to form in her eyes and would'nt stop. W-w-well where is she? Is she dead!?!
Mr. Fuller- Well right now she is on her way to Sibley Hospital and we need to meet her uo there.
Aroura and Ericah both were crying histarically because they did'nt know wheter or not she was going to live.
~Sibley Hospital~
We sat and wated in the waiting room for about an hour when suddenly the doctor came out and said...
Doctor- I have good news and bad news.
Mr. Fuller- ok give us the good news first
Doctor- well i am happy to teel you tht dhe is alive but in critical condition!
Ericah, Mr. Fuller, and Aroura were all happy to here that but the did'nt yet know what the bad news was.
Ericah- Whats the bad news doc.
Doctor- She dislocated her right shoulder, cracked 5 ribs, and has 3rd degree burns on the whole left side of her body from when the car blew up.
Aroura- Oh my god!!!!!!!
Mr. Fuller- Well can we see her?
Doctor- yes. But not for long because she needs rest.
Mr. Fuller went in first... He began to softly cry when he saw all those tubes in her body.He sat next to her and said
(Mr. Fuller) David- heyyyy.
Jessica- Hey. where am i, what are all of theese tubes, w-w-hat am i doning here! She started to panic and Mr. Fuller calmed her down and explained everthing.
Jessica- I just want to go home and get in my own bed and go to sleep.
David- I know, I know honey. This will all be over sone.
Jessica- Ok.
As Mr. Fuller left out, Ericah and Aroura came in.
The first thing they heard was the heart rate machine(beep....beep.....beep)
Ericah- hey momma, you okay?
Jessica- yea im alright
Ericah- ok good cause i dont want any thing to happen to you!
Jessica- oh dont worry, i have to be strong for you two, I cant die now!
Aroura- I love you mom and i don't want you to be driving out when its rainig ever agian
Jessica- hahaha. Trust me. I wont.
After that the heart rate machice started to go slower, and slower and slower, and finally it was non- stop.
Arouras eye widen when she realized she was dead.
Ericah got up and stared shakin her mother and by the time she could call the doctor, it was no use.
Her mother had died right in front of her!!!!!!!!
Doctors rushed in and told ericah and Aroura to leave
Theyre father didnt know that she was dead yet and Aroura and Ericah had to figure out how to tell him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Tell me if you like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On July 1st 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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OMG thats intense! thats funny cause i know a erika and my name is jessica and my dads name is david :P |
| On June 28th 2008 PorshaS Said : | |
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kmp |
| On June 19th 2008 thuhchris Said : | |
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it's good i just meant it wasnt cool that she died |
| On June 19th 2008 thuhchris Said : | |
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whoa.. thats not cool. |
| On June 19th 2008 mrsdh Said : | |
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thats so sad :-( ~tear~ |
| On June 18th 2008 AndiKHF Said : | |
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OMG ~TEAR~ |
| On June 16th 2008 Koraney Said : | |
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dis is such a good story plz keep me posted |
| On June 15th 2008 crankdatshit94 Said : | |
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this is good!!! kmpp if yuu can...thanx |
| On June 15th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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omg this is pretty good. I'm lovin' it! kmpp |
| On June 14th 2008 deshanna13 Said : | |
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i love it!thanks for tellin me about it and kmpp!=] |
