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Horror Created on 6-29-07 Views(159) Story Rating G

The basement door flung open and standing at the top of the stairs with an evil look in his eyes was Logan. "I thought you kids would've learned by now what happens when you don't make like nice kiddies and do what you're told!", he fumed. "I was sure Emily would've told you what happened." "My name's Libby!", Libby argued. 

Logan stood there in shock, as if the news being revealed to him was unheard of. He seemed to brush off what Libby said and lifted his gun in the air, pointing it at her and Tonya. "No more LOGAN!", shouted Mr. Clemmons. "This is between me and you, just let them go!" "Oh, I can't do that, Larry and you and I both know why! You stole her from me and now I'm taking her back!", he shouted, his aim turning from Libby and Tonya to Mr. Clemmons. "Does it make you angry that your own twin impersonated you to get what he wanted?", he asked Mr. Clemmons.

Mr. Clemmons' face fell as he listened on to his brother. "You knew I loved her! You told me she was in an accident and I went to help her! You took my place and married her, LARRY! She still thinks I'm YOU!!! Don't you?!", he shouted, facing Libby. Libby just sat there, trying to comprehend what was going on. "She was MY girlfriend, MY prom queen, and you couldn't stand it! Always coming in my room when she came over just to irritate me! You told her that YOU were me and married what should've been MY wife! You've been living your life as Logan Clemmons since!"

Derrick's face fell to the ground. It all made sense now. He knew that Mr. Clemmons was hiding something but who'd have thought it would turn out to be his identity. Logan kept calling him Larry but they all knew him as Mr. Clemmons. They never knew his first name but he answered Logan whenever he called him Larry, never correcting him. "Where's your license, Mr. Clemmons?", Derrick asked Mr. Clemmons.

"Oh, so you lied to them too?", Logan began. "Go on, Larry! Show them your license, your social security card, your BIRTH CERTIFICATE! You stole my identity and mom put me in a mental instituion because she didn't believe me when I told her that you married Emily, posing as me and stealing my identity! Emily never believed it either, always calling ME crazy Larry. She used to call YOU that! Show them your license, Larry! SHOW THEM!!!!!"

Mr. Clemmons slowly pulled out his wallet from his back pocket and handed it to Derrick. "I don't believe it", said Derrick. "What does it say?", asked Libby. "Logan Clemmons...", Derrick read aloud. "So you DID steal your twin's identity so you could marry his fiance. You stole his girlfriend and had him locked up in a mental institution?", he asked Mr. Clemmons. But Mr. Clemmons didn't need to answer him. They all knew it was true from the vacant expression on his face. No wonder this guy was such a psycho and no wonder he was so angry at his twin brother and they were having to punish for it!

"How could you?", Logan asked. "30 years I sat in that institution before they finally let me go. I had to pretend to be 'Larry' to get out, but hey! And now you, Mr. Fake, will die as Logan Clemmons and crazy Larry will save the day and have Emily once and for all!" He was slowly but surely losing his temper with his brother. Gun still in hand and aimed at his twin, he pointed and shot his brother in the forehead.

With that, he turned and closed the door behind him, leaving his dead brother in the basement with the remainder of the passengers. 

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On June 30th 2007 junebug2591 Said :
junebug2591 Oooohhhh! It took me a few mintues to get it, but that's awesome!!
On June 30th 2007 oreoash Said :
oreoash ohhhhhh my gawwwwd! why is everyone evil in your storeis? lol, great job
On June 29th 2007 Aegle Said :
Aegle D-A-M-N that was G-R-E-A-T that was the greatest plot twist E-V-E-R
On June 29th 2007 ray7chel Said :
ray7chel good. it was a bit confusing at one part. so logan was the one that kidnapped them and was to marry emily. but his weird brother logan took his identity and acted like him so he could marry emily?.. anyways good story/.