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Drake watched her on the balcony her long brown hair flowing in the wind. Eve’s ivory skin soaked the morning glow. She is just so beautiful, Drake thought, I must make her mine. He paced to and fro on the marble ground that surrounded the large but extraordinary fountain that Eve had designed and ordered to be made. It was rose’s veining around each other never beginning or ending. It was mind bending but so breathe taking. Drake loved the piece. The water came out in hidden area’s that the water just flowed over the sculpture into a peaceful pool of water with fresh rose petals floating.

 

Eve loved roses. They made her feel like her true self can be her own individual. Growing up Eve was raised buy a Nanny who didn’t care for her or about her. Her parents died in the war for the independence of Est Monté le Palais trying to protect her. She was barely a year old. When the tragedy happened the Nanny was put to raise her. The woman despised the family for her heart was for France. For France wanted this island and she was stuck here to take care of this child. The future Queen of Est Monté le Palais. The Nanny neglected the child but Mary, one of the dear friends of the Queen, took care of Eve and she grew to be a wonderful, caring, and beautiful girl.

 

Drake wondered the courtyard. Footsteps were heard in the distance; he stopped pacing and looked up. It was Devin, his hated enemy for he too, wanted the heart of dear Eve.

 

“What are you doing here?” Devin snapped, “Spying on the poor princess? You should be ashamed.” He finished with a slight smile.

 

“Back off Devin. I am just admiring the splendid morning.”

 

“Eve will be mine Drake no matter what you do or say. Nothing will get in my way to have the heart of the dear Princess Eve.” Devin said sternly.

 

“You can have her Devin.  She is not for me, too quiet and stubborn.”

 

          Devin Laughed, “Your loss.”

 

          Devin walked toward the balcony and yelled to the Princess, “My Dear Princess will you come for a ride with me?”

 

            Eve looked down, holding her hair at the side, “Yes Sir Devin. I will meet you by the stables at high noon.”

 

            “I will be waiting your highness.” Devin bowed and walked away with a smirk on his face glancing at Drake. Drake just gave a glare then glanced up to Eve. She was watching Drake when she noticed he was watching her she quickly turned into her chambers.

  

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Devin help Eve onto her horse. As they began to ride off to the hills, Devin asked her a serious question. “Have you chosen your husband yet Princess?” Eve blushed, “I have one in mind, but I do not think that he fancies being with me.”

 

“Who is he and I shall see if I can change is mind about being your future husband?” Eve giggled.

 

 “He is you sir,” she turned her head away.

 

“I, my dear lady? I am flattered. I would be honored to be your husband.”

 “Then I should announce it to the Court next week, the night before my birthday.” Eve smiled, her face glowed with love. Her heart pounded with excitement.   ~~~~  

Late in the night voices were whispering in abandoned hall, “I have won the heart of Princess Eve." Devin said.

 “Soon the throne will be yours Devin. And on the night of your honeymoon I will slip the poison into her goblet and the throne will be yours for taking,” said the mysterious man.

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On October 16th 2007 ellies15 Said :
ellies15 NOO STUPID DEVIN! EVIL!
On October 15th 2007 WaitingAlone Said :
WaitingAlone OH MY GOD! THIS IS GREAT! PLZ KEEP ME POSTED!!!!