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The day I lost my dad.

The day I lost my dad.

NonFiction Created on 2-20-07 Views(579) Story Rating G

I was 8 years old and my sister was 13. My mom and dad had been fighting earlier in the day, so me and my sister knew that when my dad got home we had better hide.

My sister and I were on the back porch playing with our dog. Everything was going fine when suddenly we heard the garage door opening. We ran into the house and hid in her room. After about 5 minutes had past the fighting started. I heard my mom screaming at the top of her lungs, but as an 8 year old, I continued to hide.

My older sister was all I had at the time. My mom and dad were either working or fighting and my 16 year old brother was never home.

After a few more minutes, my dad came into the bedroom and started screaming at us to come out. We were hiding under the bed. We finally came out, scared that he would hurt us if we didnt. When we sat up on the bed, he started yelling at us about cleaning the house and helping our mom around the house. It was apparent that he had been drinking, I could smell the alcohol on his breath. My mom walked into the room, standing behind him she signed for us to come with her. I got up and walked past my dad as he was screaming "Your not going anywhere, Your not leaving." I ignored his fearful tone of voice. My sister stayed in the room, shaking to the sound of my dad.

I went to the closet to get my shoes. My mom told me to go get my sister, she would be in the car. I got my shoes on and went to get my sister. We went out to the car to find that my dad was shoking my mom. Her face was so red that it appeared she already dead. I didn't know what to do. My sister automatically ran over to him and started hitting him, smacking him in his head. I was so histerical, from what I remember, it appeared that I was running in circles. My sister was screaming for me to go call someone. I ran into the house and called my grandma... I dont think she understood what I was saying but she knew that something was wrong. Somehow, my mom managed to back out of the driveway. I thought they were leaving me, but I ran as fast as I could to the car and they finally let me in. I would have done anything to not have to stay with my father.

We drove to my grandmas house where we had to fill out, what seemed to be, endless police reports. My mom told me that we were going to make it, we were strong, we could make it without my dad.

She was right, almost 10 years later, still no sign of a father figure. But we are fine. My sister is a very successful nurse at the Cleveland Clinic and I am a junior in high school.

Lesson:  No matter what may ever happen, stick close to those who are closest to you and you can accomplish anything.

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On March 14th 2008 hott555555555 Said :
hott555555555 that dad is mean if he was doing that to my mom i get a knife and KILL HIM great story too !1
On February 13th 2008 Hobonoss Said :
Hobonoss oh my jeez thats an awesome story.. i have teary eyes right now... i might not understand what you went through but it's a touching story.. HI5 to you for not being scared to do what you felt was right.. i know i wouldn't have been as strong as you. i would've shat my load and stayed in that room at that age.. you a really strong guy.. you gonna get far in life.. to you.. you like my hero!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On October 29th 2007 alienz13 Said :
alienz13 i like it
On July 5th 2007 Cheasonlw Said :
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if it werent for you and your sister, your mom probably would have been dead. Giood luck with life! :]
On June 20th 2007 danielarox101 Said :
danielarox101 ILL SHOOT DAT MUDA FUCKA N GO 2 MA GRANDMAZ HOUZ
On June 20th 2007 danielarox101 Said :
danielarox101 FUCK YA DAD
On June 20th 2007 danielarox101 Said :
danielarox101 UR STORY IZ AWESOME FUCK UR DAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On May 30th 2007 manda36274 Said :
manda36274 A very courageous story. Good Luck with your life and I think it taught you to be a better person and to treat women with respect.
On March 9th 2007 Laralei Said :
Laralei proud of people like you
On February 23rd 2007 Zing18 Said :
Zing18 wow... thats terible, u never know how important and lucky someone is to have both parents until u read this... it'll make ppl think twice
On February 23rd 2007 0GuitarGirl0 Said :
0GuitarGirl0 Hey, it's Christian girl. Wow, I can't believe how sad. One thing that could have helped you is God. I don't mean to preach at you or anything, but I recently realized that when something turns out okay, it was the hand of God helping us. We have some nieghbors that are a lot like your dad. We had to get a restraining order and all, but we are doing fine now, thanks to God, and a lot of prayer.
On February 21st 2007 Cricket1989 Said :
Cricket1989 This reminds me alot of my old family life. My Dad was (and is) addicted to drugs, and he became a family abuser. My mom and I got the same later results as yours.
On February 20th 2007 SASSYZ Said :
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This was a great story and I'm very glad your family left when you guys did. I wish the best for. you.
On February 20th 2007 SASSYZ Said :
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This was a great story and I'm very glad your family left when you guys did. I wish the best for. you.
On February 20th 2007 SASSYZ Said :
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This was a great story and I'm very glad your family left when you guys did. I wish the best for. you.
On February 20th 2007 SASSYZ Said :
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This was a great story and I'm very glad your family left when you guys did. I wish the best for. you.
On February 20th 2007 SASSYZ Said :
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This was a great story and I'm very glad your family left when you guys did. I wish the best for. you.
On February 20th 2007 jdw3443 Said :
jdw3443 I thank you guys very very much for being supportive!!
On February 20th 2007 KinkyBitch247 Said :
KinkyBitch247 I cant imagine a world like that, i hope everythings better and I give u and your family a lot of props.
On February 20th 2007 Rea1133 Said :
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im really sorry that you had to go through that... sometimes it takes things like that to happen to prove that not every body can be trusted and that you should always watch your back!!!
On February 20th 2007 oralgymnast87 Said :
oralgymnast87 thats really intense..i can't even imagine.
On February 20th 2007 TONIAP76 Said :
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THIS IS A GREAT STORY I HAVE A DAD JUST LIKE THIS!! I WISH YOU THE BEST!!