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On July 23rd 2007 SyNiStUrLy Said :
SyNiStUrLy freakin awesome!no epiloge??
On July 23rd 2007 KiddieWishes Said :
KiddieWishes awe.... an epilogue would be nice. ^_^
On July 23rd 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 an epilogue is like a short poem spoken directly to the audience "after" a story/play..
On July 23rd 2007 scooby93065 Said :
scooby93065 I think its great i would love to read an epilogue
On July 23rd 2007 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 i do love this story! there should be more!
On July 23rd 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 so I read this..I have a suggestion. Just my opinion and I hope it helps..This sounds like you're writing for only yourself to read. you are using the word "you" a lot when you are talking about Ivy/her/she/. I just think it would be much better if you used Ivy or she/her verses you..like "he smiled and kissed her" or smiled and kissed Ivy, her would be better.. or in the beginning she missed..you sounds like your trying to make the reader live the story but then when you/she answered the door she said she was Ivy..I hope this makes sense
On July 22nd 2007 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings its realy good!! love the ending..if there is more dont make it suck
On July 22nd 2007 hickey8ashlee Said :
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that is thee greatest story ever i want to read more
On July 22nd 2007 switchgeek1 Said :
switchgeek1 I really liked it, that was so cute. :)
On July 21st 2007 MangoXCaffeine Said :
MangoXCaffeine aww..what a happy ending. ^_^ i still love it anyways
On July 21st 2007 TimmyOrCliff Said :
TimmyOrCliff you should definately finish it up with the epilouge its amazing
On July 21st 2007 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 Aw, I love it!! BRAVO on the ending, but I do hope you write an epilogue!!! :)
On July 21st 2007 omfg010203 Said :
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More...but dotn make it an bad ending =(
On July 21st 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 *sqeaks*. More! Don't make it the end.
On July 21st 2007 MelissaDA Said :
MelissaDA I love it! wonderful, but i think that is a too-good-to-be-true ending, definately. nothing that wonderful ever happens. if you continue, keep me posted!
On July 21st 2007 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen awwwwwww cute. =] love sucks.
On July 21st 2007 Byrnesrebel Said :
Byrnesrebel OMG! yay. lol. keep me posted!
On July 21st 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 you should have added more detail lol i like happy endings but i kinda dont want that being the end.
On July 21st 2007 BYMcFroodles Said :
BYMcFroodles YaY.. y must you hate happy endins i LOVE them, so leave it this way.... thank you.. lol please please please im begging.. haha
On July 21st 2007 stubishead Said :
stubishead ooo. nice. so sweet. but it still leaves me hanging for more...!
On July 21st 2007 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Wow! That really happy end!! But..it make me feel like there has moree! But I want to ya to not stop, plz moreee! Lol
On July 21st 2007 number661 Said :
number661 i liked it but i think that was a to-good-to-be-true ending lol
On July 21st 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 I love it!! i love you!! please keep me posted for more!!! *Jewell*