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On July 23rd 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 so you used first and second persons mixed then. you didn't say you love him..you said I live you and I love him..
On July 23rd 2007 SacredEvil Said :
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Wow! I read all 16 parts and I have to say the truth.. that story is amazing! I got pulled into it as I began reading.. I also have to agree. Nooo please don't be the end!
On July 23rd 2007 SacredEvil Said :
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Wow! I read all 16 parts and I have to say the truth.. that story is amazing! I got pulled into it as I began reading.. I also have to agree. Nooo please don't be the end!
On July 23rd 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 in the beginning read it as Ivy and Andrew arrived in front of her apartment ..because that's who you are talking about.."you" does not fit...
On July 23rd 2007 browneyes33 Said :
browneyes33 Ivy would you prefer people tell you what you want to hear or the truth?..A story is not like a poem it must makes sense.. I like the thought behind the story but I feel you are trying to fit a lot of information in few words Also the use of the word "you" when you are talking about a her/she named Ivy. I am sincerely trying to help you so I'm being completely honest..read this back to yourself and add she or her in the place of you..
On July 22nd 2007 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings aw thats sad...*tear* he HAS to come back! RAWR
On July 21st 2007 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 Amazing! :) :)
On July 21st 2007 MelissaDA Said :
MelissaDA i love it!
On July 20th 2007 Pooh455 Said :
Pooh455 no that cant be the end. plz nooo
On July 20th 2007 bluedragon22 Said :
bluedragon22 WHAT!!! NO, it cant be the end, I want more!!!!
On July 20th 2007 grassfairy02 Said :
grassfairy02 that cant be the end.
On July 20th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 No! You can't end this! I love this series! That was a great ending though. But it can't be the end!
On July 20th 2007 lonchaney4ever Said :
lonchaney4ever NOOOOOO DONT END IT I WANT MORE OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN!!!
On July 20th 2007 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Wow! I really love it!! Omg! It is end? I really want to read it moreeeee!! Ur really good writen!!! If there more then post me!!! Plzzz
On July 20th 2007 Byrnesrebel Said :
Byrnesrebel omg, love the story. keep me posted.
On July 20th 2007 omfg010203 Said :
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MORE!!! NO WAYU UH UH!!~!!!!U HAVE TO KEEP WRITING!
On July 20th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 p.s. keep me posted!
On July 20th 2007 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 you cant stop writeing now!!! ill go insaine!! come on! this cant be the way it ends!!! please write more!!!
On July 20th 2007 october1015 Said :
october1015 omg. u better write more. he can't leave her!!! nooooooooooooooooooo
On July 20th 2007 TimmyOrCliff Said :
TimmyOrCliff amazing, but i wish it werent the end. im a guy yes but i did like it alot.
On July 20th 2007 ods411 Said :
ods411 i loved it but plz wirte more plz don't let this be the end!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
On July 20th 2007 scooby93065 Said :
scooby93065 its really good sad though but very good
On July 20th 2007 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 awww love it sad ending tho..
On July 20th 2007 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen awww the end?? i dont want it to end =[
On July 20th 2007 stubishead Said :
stubishead aww. good ending. but is it really the end? =[