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In Too Deep
Horror
 Created on 6-26-08
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 Story Rating G
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"Boo." He said coming up behind me. "Pierre!" I yelled playfully hitting his arm. "Come on, I have to show you something." "What?" "Just come on, Sam."
"Great isn't it?" he asked me, pointing to a ship. "Pierre, you know I'm afraid of boats." "Well, this is a ship." "HaHa, Pieree, very funny." "Just come on. It'll be fun." "I don't...." before I could finish my sentence, he was pulling me towards it.
"Hey, what's wrong?" he questioned me as I was watching us leave the shore. "Hey Pierre. I'm sorry, I'm being a killjoy." "You're not having fun?" Suddenly, before I could answer, the ship shakes. "What's going on?" I hear someone say. "Hey you. Look down and see what's going on with the captain." I do as I'm told, but all I see is water. "There's nothing down there for the captain, just water." "And the captain?" I just shake my head and look down. "NO! DADDY!" I hearsomeone else say running towards the edge. "No." She crys. "What's happening?" Pierre yells at me. "I don't know!" I yell back. "If you can remember, it wasn't my idea to get on this stupid boat!" "I know, I'm sorry." The boat shakes again. Someone screams. SPLASH! "Oh no." "Help!" Pierre looks in the water to see his love, Britney. "Britney?" "Yes, you idiot, now get me out of here!" "Okay, here grab my hand." "PULL! Whoa something's got me. Something's grabbing my leg." She screams. "Help!" Pierre starts to fall in. I help him up on the boat and he lets go of Britney. "NO! BRITNEY?!" Pierre yells looking down in the water to see nothing but bubbles. "Thanks, Sam. Now she's dead."
"Great isn't it?" he asked me, pointing to a ship. "Pierre, you know I'm afraid of boats." "Well, this is a ship." "HaHa, Pieree, very funny." "Just come on. It'll be fun." "I don't...." before I could finish my sentence, he was pulling me towards it.
"Hey, what's wrong?" he questioned me as I was watching us leave the shore. "Hey Pierre. I'm sorry, I'm being a killjoy." "You're not having fun?" Suddenly, before I could answer, the ship shakes. "What's going on?" I hear someone say. "Hey you. Look down and see what's going on with the captain." I do as I'm told, but all I see is water. "There's nothing down there for the captain, just water." "And the captain?" I just shake my head and look down. "NO! DADDY!" I hearsomeone else say running towards the edge. "No." She crys. "What's happening?" Pierre yells at me. "I don't know!" I yell back. "If you can remember, it wasn't my idea to get on this stupid boat!" "I know, I'm sorry." The boat shakes again. Someone screams. SPLASH! "Oh no." "Help!" Pierre looks in the water to see his love, Britney. "Britney?" "Yes, you idiot, now get me out of here!" "Okay, here grab my hand." "PULL! Whoa something's got me. Something's grabbing my leg." She screams. "Help!" Pierre starts to fall in. I help him up on the boat and he lets go of Britney. "NO! BRITNEY?!" Pierre yells looking down in the water to see nothing but bubbles. "Thanks, Sam. Now she's dead."
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wow! this is really different, i like it tho |
