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Abuse{5}
Tragedy
 Created on 3-18-08
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 Story Rating G
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2 years later.
I was 16 now. I had been living with a friend and decided to go back home to see Phoebe, which was now 15.
I sighed. I was dreading the walk inside the door and seeing him, but was excited about seeing Phoebe. Suddenly, I heard a scream. It was Phoebe. "Phoebe!?" Iscreamed out as I ran in the door. I saw her falling down the stairs. Iran over to her and sat down beside her. I noticed bruises all over her body. Dried up blood up and down her legs. I shouldn't have left her. I'm so stupid. A tear slipped down my cheek as she slowly opened her eyes. "Bridgette! Thank God!" She wrapped her thin arms around me, gripping me tightly. We heard a crash and both looked up at the top of the stairs to see, the one, the only, Phillip, aka Dad. "Run." I told her quickly as he began walking down the stairs, drunk as usual. "Bridgette. I missed you baby." he said grabbing me before I could run. He picked me up, holding me tight, opened the door to the garage, and threw out the door, leaving me laying there bleeding, crying, and hoping he would leave Phoebe alone. I stood up and ran out the arage door. I cried out to Phoebe, "Phoebe!! Come with me, we don't have to go through this anymore, come on!!" Bang!! I fell to the ground looking up to see him with a shovel. He dragge me back to the garage and left for a minute.
Once he came back, he was pouring water all over me. I don't understand. How can water smell so bad? Then he threw the can to the wall and he lit a match. He dropped it on me with such pleasure in his eyes. "NOOOOOOO!!!" Phoebe cried out. BANG BANG BANG!!! The gun she pulled out went off leaving three bullets inside of Phillip. "Bridgette." she cried dropping the gun and falling to her knees.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On March 19th 2008 drumrguy08 Said : | |
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i wouldve nvr guessed, ur a great writer, kmp on new stories :). |
| On March 19th 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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i like this keep going if you do kmp your amazing |
| On March 18th 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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whoa didnt see that coming!! luv it! kmp plz! dont quit writing cuz everyone doesnt like! we r gonna b famous one day and we r gonna laugh in ppls faces who doubted us!! lol sounds fun huh? luv, your caring friend!!!! (Destiny) just in case u think its some1 else! lol |
