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The stranger next store

Horror

Created on 5-4-07

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Bessy looked out the car window"we don't have to go you can still change your mind"her mother looked back anoyed.Bessy slumed back in her seat looking at the lovley view one last time and the where off.she closed her eyes and went to sleep.afew hours later her mother shook her awake"where almost there honey"her dad said.As they pulled into the driveway she saw an old man staring at her.She felt something strange about him."where here"her mom said."Does that man look strange to you"Bessy said"BESSY"her mom said"be nice"as they walked in the house the man stared her down.It was two a.m. when she heard a noise next door she put on her robe and went to check out the noise.As she creeped twords the house someone grabbed her from behind"please"she yelled"leave me alone"."What are you doing out so late"the old man said.He drug her into his house and tied her up"stop it let me go"she said."cant do just cant do"he said.He took his knife and staped it in her heart.she shout out of bed.she was in her old room"what a night mare"she said. it was just a dream

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On May 9th 2007 ybgrreject Said :

	i like,lol...you should go read the beginning of my book, on my profile,:D

On May 5th 2007 Ma24179 Said :

	I think you could have done more with it... It has potential.

On May 4th 2007 JCwashington13 Said :

	Very confusing, but Good.

On May 4th 2007 wildkidd14 Said :

	it's..........ok too confusing though

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