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the darkness

Horror Created on 4-24-07 Views(68) Story Rating G

one hot summer day a 15 year old girl sat in the shade of an oak tree.in a few hours her 16th birthday would start and she would get a chance to show off her new dress.yet she had a very strange feeling.she shruged it off and read her book.a few hours later her mother called her to come and get ready.30 minutes later the door bell rang."I'll get it"Alex said.she opend the door and a bid croud came in.they had so much fun when she heard a wispering in the bushes"hello"she said.but no anwser came"hello"she said again.then a whisper so spine chilling she could hardly breath come"come to me"she started walking into the maze"ya'll this isant funny come on"."come to me" the wisper said She heard it comeing from all around.suddenly she felt a hot breath on her back.she turned around to find a shadow watching her.she turnd around and ran as fast as she could and didn't look back.all of the sudden she triped.she tried to get up but she couldent.she was stuck.she looked back and watched the shadow creap twards her.it grabed her arm when she heard her friends yell"ALEX"the shadow disapered and she passed out.three days later she woke up in her room"what happend"she said."you drank to much punch and went in the maze and passed out"her mom said"your lucky your friends followed you otherwise youd still be in there""now get some sleep".her mom left the room.she sat there for a minute intill she heard a wisper.she opnd her mouth to yell but she couldent.the shadow swoped over her and looked into her eyes.and she vanished.

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On May 2nd 2007 ohiostate1154 Said :
ohiostate1154 OMG...that was really good. i really liked that. i mean i really got in to that...great job...