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Leaving (preview)

Romance Created on 9-3-08 Views(84) Story Rating G

This is a preview of a story im thinking about writing so yeah im not the best writer but on here(probably not close) but hey I try!!!!!

“I love you,” I whispered under my breath as he walked away. I was going to miss him. He was the peanut butter to my crazy jelly. I stared at him for what seemed like forever then I turned and walked in the opposite direction knowing nothing will ever be the same.

Jake looked back at the girl he fell head over heels for the moment they met. She was gone and that made him sad, almost to the point of crying. He knew he had to be strong. Keep his head held high, shoulders back and he was ready for anything.

As I walked I began to cry, Jake was leaving and I felt like I needed him more then ever!

This will actually be part of the story that's why it's a preview!!

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On September 3rd 2008 kitkat298 Said :
kitkat298 very good...keep writing plz
On September 3rd 2008 bowzlady1 Said :
bowzlady1 Good Start!