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I'm alone in this world...

Creative Created on 9-20-07 Views(142) Story Rating G

You know what I hate? People who think they're better than everyone else. They walk around with the head held high thinking they're "all that"...until someone tells them they have a hole in there trousers...hmm oops.

That seems to happen alot at my school. I walk around in the shadows being ingnored and I observe people. It makes me laugh when those "better people" make a fool of themselves. Then they notice me and then i have to walk off quickly before a scence is caused.

I'm in maths at the moment. It's 2:20 in the afternoon and everyone is too hot to pay attention to Miss Woodward who's going on about quadratics or somethin like that. I'm at the back of the classroom sittin by myself listening to PapaRoach- gettin away with murder. I'm sweating and my skin is itching underneath the jumper i'm wearing. I can't take it off because everyone will know...everyone will see...

they can't see...they can't know...got to keep it a secret.

 What?! Shut up Natalie, You're letting them in your head again. I shake my head and look around the classroom. Everyone's there. NO one is out of place, they're all sitting there waiting for that heavenly bell to ring. 

Wait who's that?!

 I stare at the guy on the opposite side of the classroom. He has copper red hair, which gently falls down by his shoulders, a few pieces of his silky hair is covering his eyes giving him an enclosed look. I dare myself to lean foreward slightly...trying to get a look at those eyes I know will be breath taking.

Just a bit further

I start to see more of his face, pale, bright...smooth. 

Shit!

I lean foreward too far and i fall off my chair. I land on the floor with a thud and everyone looks around startled. I wince as my arm starts to ache, I feel parts pounding...they'vre open up again! No no no!! I start to panic! Everyone's looking at me, all those eyes, all over me,

They know!! They know! Run out! Get away!

I clamber back on to my chair and i feel myself blushing. Everyone laughs and eventually turns there attention back to the front board. I scan the others and notice the copper haired guy is looking directly at me. His brilliant blue eyes pierce mine, and i feel my heart pounding. I smile weakly and he turns back around. I feel crestfallen and continue listening to my music, waiting for the bell to ring.    

 

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On April 29th 2008 ScarletRegret Said :
ScarletRegret wowzers! it really keeps you hooked. i love the style of it aswell...i duno how to describe it but it just feels so real. and papa roach getting away with murder...great song! XD cnt wait to read the next part
On September 25th 2007 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst pretty damn koo :)
On September 20th 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz its adorable! keepeth me posted. haha
On September 20th 2007 X4packchickX Said :
X4packchickX hah, cute! ^-^
On September 20th 2007 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 wow...I likes it alot! really good. let me know when you make another.
On September 20th 2007 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 wow...I likes it alot! really good. let me know when you make another.
On September 20th 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 wow... i likes it... YAY!!