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Freedom Riders (Prologue)

Freedom Riders (1)

Creative Created on 11-20-07 Views(126) Story Rating G

 UP AT THE BARN

Jaden and I saw Brad coming down the driveway.

"Hey what are you guys doing?" Brad questioned.

"Just hanging out. Jaden just put Vanity back into here stall."

"Can I ride her?"

Brad was always upset about not being able to ride Vanity. Jaden was a leary on it, but something made her change here mind.

I started to laugh because he had no idea how to get on a horse.

"Brad what are you doing? Do you even know how to get on a horse?" Jaden asked.

"Sure, why'd you ask?"

"Because the heads that way! Your facing the rear" she chuckled.

"Oh. How do you get her to go?"

Vanity took off like the speed of light. When some one says go, she goes! I don't think I've ever seen her this fast before. I got a timer from up in the barn and I was amazed. She ran, letting the wind pass her wonderful mane. Brad was so freaked out. Jaden really trained Vanity cause when she put her hand out to tell her to stop, she stopped.

Brad came flying face first, literally planted into the ground.

"Brad are you alright" I said.

"Couldn't have felt better" he replied, trying his best

"Jaden, did you see how fast Vanity was?"

"Yeah. What was her time?"

"24 seconds from here to the end of the pasture."

"Really! That's great! I was thinking of putting her in a race down in Kentucky next week."

"That sounds like a lot of fun. I wish luck"

"Thanks." Jaden looked down at her watch. "Oh, no. I need to get home. My mother told me to be home by 3. It's 20 minutes after. I catch y'all later guys"

"See ya" I yelled.

I heard Brad mummling something like "I'm going to kill..." and that's all I heard...

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On December 5th 2007 jimbob1432 Said :
jimbob1432 bien.
On November 24th 2007 WildDream Said :
WildDream Kill kill kill! :o Keep me postedddd
On November 22nd 2007 Harumi13 Said :
Harumi13 i like it good job...^-^can't wait to read the next
On November 21st 2007 analyssarenae Said :
analyssarenae oooo interested! KEEP ME POSTED!
On November 21st 2007 cheerwine14352 Said :
cheerwine14352 haha he couldn't get on the horse the right way =] that made me laugh good job!
On November 20th 2007 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 awsome keep me posted
On November 20th 2007 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster 'NOTHER RATE FOR YOU! i like stories about teh mads and horses and "NO!"
On November 20th 2007 countryfreak13 Said :
countryfreak13 This is great! Brad's getting angry!! Oh, no! I need to read more! Keep me posted too! :P
On November 20th 2007 loveXafterXall Said :
loveXafterXall amazing story! keep me posted?
On November 20th 2007 DeanCentricGal Said :
DeanCentricGal love it! keep me posted please!
On November 20th 2007 babydoll6789 Said :
babydoll6789 love it keep me posted!