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Horror Created on 9-11-07 Views(67) Story Rating G

Twenty Minutes…I was afraid of many things when I was little. It all started from the young, pale little girl with greasy, strait, black hair that went to her hips, eyes a little bigger than  quarters, and wearing a blue night gown, in my closet. She looked the age of eight but seems so much smarter than the average eight year old.I didn’t know about her until my older sister, Desiree, and my older brother, Adam, told me about her, but their description of her was scary but, if u know me… u know that my imagination makes things way worst then the truth. If u are one of my friends that has ever spent the night at my house, I don’t know if you noticed but, my closet door is ALWAYS closed no matter what. If my closet door isn’t closed I will not sleep that night. I will be too terrified because every night, when the closet door is open, I look at the crack of the door, between the door and the wall, and I see her… I see her big black piercing eyes staring right through me and I get a chill down my spine that climbs back up into my throat, and I can’t breathe. Then as fast as lightning she runs out of the closet and out my bedroom door and she’ll come back twenty minutes later and in that twenty minutes, while she’s out of the room, I lay there, strait, holding my breathe the best I could, slowly putting the blanket over my head, trying to keep cool because I’m getting hot and sweaty.When she comes back I… hear her. It sounds so quick, but by then I’m so scared I’m praying to God, “God, please make this stop!” After a while I get myself together, take deep breathes, get out from under the covers, turn on my lamp, stand up,  turn on my room light, tiptoe to the closet, SLAM the door, RUN to my light switch, turn it OFF, JUMP on my bed, turn off the lamp, and HIDE under my blanket… then I go to sleep.

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On March 17th 2008 BitchyWitchyX Said :
BitchyWitchyX Thats sooooo scariiiiii Did this reli happen to you?
On September 11th 2007 eric101106 Said :
eric101106 What is her reason for being gone for twenty minutes...maybe she is trying to show u something.Once se is in peace sh will go away
On September 11th 2007 eric101106 Said :
eric101106 If i were you I would keep the lights ON. When I was little there was something in the closet at home as well...to this day I am 21 and cannot sleep without a nightlight and the closet doors all four of them shut!!!!!!If you believe in God my Pastor used to come and pray over the house....and he would tell us in church to say with faith....in the name of jesus christ leave this house and in his name don't you ever come back. Do you still have this problem? AHHHH it scares to think about what it was like living in that house. I used to see evil spirits in the form of my siblings and they would call me and tell me it was time to go. Then they would go out the front door well through it anyway. I almost got up one time and followed them. I was so little I didn't know to be afraid. Then i laid back down and told them i was to tired to go and would fall back asleep. Unfortunately I now live across the road from the same house i grew up in. I will not go over there. I have been over outside to visit the neighbors but not in the house..