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A cowboys love part 2

Creative Created on 6-18-07 Views(113) Story Rating G

    I took my hand away from Emily and went to go see my brother. " Hey Trey come here."He was talking to some of the other kids and they were about to play tag. " Hey Bubee." he said walking up to me. " Did I do good?" he asked grinning. I bent down on my knee. " You were excellent. Pa would have been proud." You see my Pa died a year ago doing what he did best, Ridin'. A bull puntured his lung and he died. The doctor couldn't save him. I'm basically taking his place at the house and in ridin' i've been working my way up to some of his accomplishments. Like being the youngest bull rider in the state. John said it wasn't a good idea but i think i can take it, i mean i've taken some of the meanest horses they got.

    I hugged him " Now go play squirt." I laughed at how all the kids said he was it and he had a real funny face on. I stood up and adjusted my hat. It was real hot out and it was taking a toll on me. I was getting tired and hungry. I went and stood in the huge line for a funnel cake. It took forever but i finally got one. I went and sat in the bed of my truck and ate it. I got the powdered sugar everywhere, always do but they just taste so good i can't give them up.

     i laid back and looked at the stars. I always get bored after ridin' it's my passion i love nothing else but it, besides my family and Sam even if she is probably mad right now. 

     " Trever." someone called.I sat up and saw it was Sam. She had a serious look on her face.  "Hey, i just want to say that i don't like her." " It's ok i know." She had a huge grin on her face. " What?" " Why do you keep eating funnel cakes when your so messy?" " Oh, their good." i whiped my mouth off. " you missed some." She pointed to her lip. i wiped my mouth. " No it's still there." she giggled. She got up on the truck and sat next to me. She wiped it off with her thumb.

    "You know i really do still love you." i said.

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On July 25th 2008 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane Now I want a funnel cake!! LOL. Anyways, I'm still really enjoying this little story and am excited to see how it plays out~
On June 21st 2007 Savedbyalamb Said :
Savedbyalamb I love it! =)
On June 19th 2007 grassfairy02 Said :
grassfairy02 still like it
On June 19th 2007 lvm3932 Said :
lvm3932 its sweet the bigginng was sad but i love it =)
On June 19th 2007 beachparty57 Said :
beachparty57 This is really good... please write more!!!!!
On June 18th 2007 Aegle Said :
Aegle oh its soooooo short. Keep it up though. and keep me posted
On June 18th 2007 andyaloha15 Said :
my picture
i like it so far