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Never to Cheat

Tragedy Created on 6-20-07 Views(28) Story Rating G

He sits in his room, itching at his heart, whishing he hadn’t two-timed her. She was betrayed by the one she held ever so dearly. She thought it to be a deranged idea until she saw them kissing. She felt a stabbing pain twinge through her body until it reached her heart… tearing it in two. She yearned to anguish the burning sensation deep within her throbbing core. For she was pretty but not as alluring as the other had been. She firmly decided upon the idea of taking control of her delicately off-set life. She entered the kitchen, grabbed a knife and exited. She sat down in her icy, porcelain bathtub and took the knife in her left hand while placing her right, palm up, on the ledge. The knife ripped into her clammy skin until it reached her clattering bones. The blood leaked out creating a thick, burgundy waterfall. Her blood and soul left her body through the gaping vent she had created. He came over that night to apologize for his cold-hearted behavior but instead found her lying in a pool of her own aching blood with a note by the sink. It read as followed, “Without your love I couldn’t live. Without your touch I would surely die.” Tears rolled down his cheek onto hers while searching for the answer through a coiled mess, called his brain. In the blink of an eye, he vouched to never cheat on another girl until hell froze over. NEVER!!

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On July 16th 2007 Aaquaian Said :
Aaquaian Descriptive... to say the least. Very good piece you have here.
On June 20th 2007 gennae Said :
gennae gr8 story