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Somnio Despero Ch. 3
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 Created on 6-20-08
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Patrick was suddenly pulled inside a very fancy hotel. The well-dressed guests and uniformed staff wrinkled their noses at Patrick’s long flyaway hair and worn out attire, but didn’t seem to notice the curly headed girl in the paisley skirt.
Daphne dragged the two of them into a spacious elevator and pressed the button for the doors to close.
As the doors slid shut, she breathed a sigh of relief. “That was close.”
Then she calmly went to the button pad and slid her nail between the metal plates connecting it. To Patrick’s amazement, Daphne then flipped the panel over to a set of different buttons with strange symbols similar to those on her pouch.
“I don’t have time to explain right now, but Jasmine and I will later,” She said, pressing several buttons.
Patrick was too dazed with what was happening and who he was with to ask anything at the moment.
“Hold tight,” Daphne warned, gripping the railings.
Patrick put one hand on the railing and suddenly they were hurtling upwards, causing him to stumble.
“Whoa!” he shouted, trying to regain his balance.
Daphne giggled and the elevator stopped with a jolt. Patrick stumbled again as the doors opened to reveal the most fantastic place he’d ever seen…….
Large trees of all kinds shaded a lush forest, with tiny purple flowers carpeting the ground and berry bushes heavy with fruit scattered everywhere. It looked like the nature park Patrick used to go to with Jasmine, only thicker and more beautiful. There was a tropical rainforest adjacent, with green vines roping the forest and larger-than-life butterflies fluttering. Golden fields, much like the ones he remembered, stretched out on the horizon. Every kind of landscape he’d ever seen seemed to run into one another, overlapping beautifully. Patrick could see that the land stretched farther beyond, and saw that this was only the beginning. He gazed in awe.
Daphne emerged from a nearby orchard eating a juicy pear.
“This place … what is it?” Patrick asked.
“All of your dreams.”
Patrick turned around to see the most beautiful thing he’d seen in the forest. Jasmine faced him smiling in a yellow sun dress, with her red hair spilling over her shoulder and face more radiant than he’d ever seen. She took his face in her hands and kissed him, and the smell of lavender, the smell of her, was all around him.
“This is where you’ve been?” Patrick whispered, feeling Jasmine face and hair as if he wasn’t sure she was real. “How?”
Jasmine kissed him again and slid her arm around his waist. “I’ll explain everything.”Comments
Please Login to post comments| On July 9th 2008 Robert93635 Said : | |
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awesome. |
| On June 21st 2008 lilshithead061 Said : | |
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I like it and thats cool that an elevator took them to this. Kmp |
| On June 21st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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awww,this is very sweet.I can imagine them kissing.lol,i also imagine myself in a yellow dress.mmm |
