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 Created on 5-28-07
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"Okay, well now its time for bed, Jonathon." said his mom.
"Fine, let me finsh this level though, I'm almost done with the game." said Jonathon(We will call him Jon)
"No! Now, get in bed or I'll turn that thing off!" screamed his mom.
"FINE! I hate you! I hope one day you die!" replied Jon.
"Don't you ever say that young man, because one day that could happen." she said.
After Jon was tucked in bed, and fast asleep his mom went downstairs with her husband to drink coffee and watch the 11:00 p.m. news.
"He yelled at you, again." he said
"Jim, I never get him tonight he said I hope you die!" she said.
"Barb maybe we are pushing him." Jim said.
"Well, maybe." said Barb.
They finally starting to watch the news and a 'Live' update was happening.
"Hello, this is Kim Ryans with the news. We have been told that a escaped mental patient has been seen. The areas that he has been spotted follow: Kimberlane, West Drive, and Evans Avenue. Please lock your doors, because he may be armed with a large butchers knife."
"Honey, I'll go lock the doors." said Barb.
"Quickly!" said Jim.
They lived on Kimberlane. "Ahh, get of me! Help! Mom, Dad!" screamed Jon, from his bedroom.
"JON!" screamed Barb and Jim.
They ran up the stairs into his bedroom to find an old man, standing on Jon's bed, over Jon with a knife pointing right into Jon's head.
"Oh! The parents have arrived." said the mental patient, "Do not move! Or your son will die, and so will you!"
They stood there, with a mental patient threatening their son, and parents scared half to death. Finally Jim(dad) ran after the patient when he was looking away, threw him off the bed, and started to beat him up on the floor. Then you heard skin tear, and when Barb(mom) and Jon went over to look they saw their cutted husband and father laying on the floor.
"Ha,ha,ha!" the patient giggled, "I said he would die."
Barb and Jon started to run to the stairs, when the patient ran toward Barb, and stabbed her in the back. She felled to the ground and told Jon to run to the neighbors and call the cops. Jon was on his way down the steps when he tripped, he tumbled to the ground dieing at the end of the steps. Cops finally came, and found a note over Jon's dead broken body, then the same note of the gutted father, and blood drained mother. The note read:
Dear People,
I had to kill once again. Killing families is my thing, as you can probaly see. Well this family had a reason to die, they were cheats, and fakes. Always being nice to people, when really they hated each other. The father Jim, would cheat on his wife, with his best friends wife. How brutal. Barb the mother, was a fake. She acted all happy when she had suicde in her mind, and Jon the son. Well his story his short, but he was bullied hate his mother and finally got his wish. She is dead, and now they all can sleep peacefully...forever!
From,
Some killer.
"Fine, let me finsh this level though, I'm almost done with the game." said Jonathon(We will call him Jon)
"No! Now, get in bed or I'll turn that thing off!" screamed his mom.
"FINE! I hate you! I hope one day you die!" replied Jon.
"Don't you ever say that young man, because one day that could happen." she said.
After Jon was tucked in bed, and fast asleep his mom went downstairs with her husband to drink coffee and watch the 11:00 p.m. news.
"He yelled at you, again." he said
"Jim, I never get him tonight he said I hope you die!" she said.
"Barb maybe we are pushing him." Jim said.
"Well, maybe." said Barb.
They finally starting to watch the news and a 'Live' update was happening.
"Hello, this is Kim Ryans with the news. We have been told that a escaped mental patient has been seen. The areas that he has been spotted follow: Kimberlane, West Drive, and Evans Avenue. Please lock your doors, because he may be armed with a large butchers knife."
"Honey, I'll go lock the doors." said Barb.
"Quickly!" said Jim.
They lived on Kimberlane. "Ahh, get of me! Help! Mom, Dad!" screamed Jon, from his bedroom.
"JON!" screamed Barb and Jim.
They ran up the stairs into his bedroom to find an old man, standing on Jon's bed, over Jon with a knife pointing right into Jon's head.
"Oh! The parents have arrived." said the mental patient, "Do not move! Or your son will die, and so will you!"
They stood there, with a mental patient threatening their son, and parents scared half to death. Finally Jim(dad) ran after the patient when he was looking away, threw him off the bed, and started to beat him up on the floor. Then you heard skin tear, and when Barb(mom) and Jon went over to look they saw their cutted husband and father laying on the floor.
"Ha,ha,ha!" the patient giggled, "I said he would die."
Barb and Jon started to run to the stairs, when the patient ran toward Barb, and stabbed her in the back. She felled to the ground and told Jon to run to the neighbors and call the cops. Jon was on his way down the steps when he tripped, he tumbled to the ground dieing at the end of the steps. Cops finally came, and found a note over Jon's dead broken body, then the same note of the gutted father, and blood drained mother. The note read:
Dear People,
I had to kill once again. Killing families is my thing, as you can probaly see. Well this family had a reason to die, they were cheats, and fakes. Always being nice to people, when really they hated each other. The father Jim, would cheat on his wife, with his best friends wife. How brutal. Barb the mother, was a fake. She acted all happy when she had suicde in her mind, and Jon the son. Well his story his short, but he was bullied hate his mother and finally got his wish. She is dead, and now they all can sleep peacefully...forever!
From,
Some killer.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On February 5th 2008 D4I2K Said : | |
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This needs more fapping and lolis. Then it would be full of epic lulz |
| On December 20th 2007 bbzgurl1019 Said : | |
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damn that good |
| On September 3rd 2007 NarutoKid246 Said : | |
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IT WAS OK I DIDNTEXPECT THE KID TO DIE THOW!!!BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD |
| On June 23rd 2007 inlovewithc17 Said : | |
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wow that was weird but good i liked it you need to make another one |
| On May 28th 2007 gennae Said : | |
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You need 2 make more like it!!!!!!!!!1 |
| On May 28th 2007 krista32890 Said : | |
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haha, from some killer. |
