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Jessi and Ben
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 Created on 1-25-08
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Okay so I’m not very good at writing but I’m going to try and write a story. Hopefully it will turn out!
Ring Ring. “Hey doll face!!!” I said to one of my favorite cousins. “What’s up?”
“Jessi someone thinks your beautiful!!!” She sang into the phone.
“Huh? What in the world are you talking about? Who is it? Do I know them?” I started to get really excited!!! I wanted to know so bad who though I looked good! I started going through a list of names on who it could be. Let’s see…it has to be someone that lives close to her…Luke? Hummm no I don’t think it would be him…Sam? Well I know he likes me but I don’t think that’s it.“No you don’t know him” she said still singing into the phone.
“Well then tell me who is it?”
“He doesn’t want me to tell you.”
“Well just tell me! If he doesn’t know me then who cares? And if he asks if you told me just say no. Please tell me Nikki!!! I began begging her I badly needed to know who though I was hot!
“Okay fine I’ll tell you! He’s my boyfriend’s brother Ben.”
“Oh okay.” I didn’t know what to say. She was right I didn’t know him and I didn’t see a point in getting all excited about it.
The next day at 2:00 pmI decided since I was really bored anyways I would sign on and see who was on. Of course Nikki is online.
Nikki: HEY JESSI!!!!!
Jessi: hey Nikki how are you?
Nikki: just peachy!!
Jessi: that’s good!
Nikki: so have you been thinking about Ben?
Jessi: What in the world Nikki?!?!? Just because he thinks I’m beautiful doesn’t mean I like him! I don’t even know him!
Nikki: so don’t you want to get to know him??
Jessi: idk why?
Nikki: because he added you on MySpace! He wants to get to know you!!!
Jessi: lol okay w/e doesn’t mean any thing Nikki.
Nikki: you never know. What happens if he’s something and you really start to like him? Huh?
Jessi: idk
I started to get really interested. I really did want to get to know him and just knowing that he though I looked good made it all the more worth it! So as fast as I could I signed onto MySpace. And guess what? He was on!!! I was so excited but I knew that he didn’t know Nikki told me about him so I messaged him asking who he was. He replied saying he was Nick’s brother. (Nick is Nikki’s boyfriend.) So Ben and I just talked the rest of the after noon about anything that came to mind. He was so nice and so sweet! He was amazing! Maybe Nikki was right. Maybe he will become something to me!
Ok so this is all I have so far. Tell me weather I should keep going or not!!!
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On February 8th 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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kmp and sorry it took so long i been out of town |
| On January 30th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said : | |
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i like it |
| On January 30th 2008 LizWinker93 Said : | |
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i like it! you gotta keep writing it. and see.. lotsa people commented you! (: oh and this is kaity on lizs thingy. |
| On January 30th 2008 dancenightaway Said : | |
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wait is nikki ur "cousin"? lol. and i like it keep going. |
| On January 29th 2008 sen7593 Said : | |
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love it jessi, keep writeing! :]]
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| On January 25th 2008 mergily18 Said : | |
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continue please! lovin it! please oh please kmp |
| On January 25th 2008 kkaelaa Said : | |
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Nice Job Jessica. I hope you continue. |
| On January 25th 2008 kg108551 Said : | |
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WoW! I really think you sound! Keep it up! kmp if u continue! :) |
| On January 25th 2008 LizWinker93 Said : | |
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good job jessi :]
keep writing. perfect situation ;] |
| On January 25th 2008 TaylorAlexis12 Said : | |
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Definitely :P |
