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Live or Die (part 9)
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Out of the flames of the fire, came the most evil thing ever thought of. It was
the demon of all demons, something god himself couldn’t even turn good. Out of
the flames of hell came the Devil. Pitch fork in hand and skin a red as blood, he
was there. Ready to take everything from this world, no soul had a chance of
surviving this terrible creature.
I stepped back and bumped into Jacob. I looked up and he was wide eyed and
jaw dropped. Neither of us knew what to think as the devil stepped out of his
flames and onto the ground before us. We couldn’t move, we were frozen still
with fear and shock.
authors note: sorry that its so short i'm just havign a hard time writign this tory so some help or ideas of how to go about with this story would be great and very helpful tell me what you think please luv~ Haley
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| On March 30th 2008 7unicornrings Said : | |
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aaaaahh. no =''( way too short but so so good!! plz hurry with the next part. if i could help i def. would. i love it tho! XD |
| On March 29th 2008 hippppoo101 Said : | |
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i'm going to write a part 9 (2nd half) to it since it was so short but please comment on this i need some help to finish this story luv~ |


