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Live or Die (part 8)

Creative Created on 11-2-07 Views(92) Story Rating G

My heart was beating faster and faster as he got closer and closer to Kimmie. He jumped on her and starting punching her. Then he grabbed he throat. She couldn’t breath and she was fighting to live. Then she was motionless and Jacob and I thought she was dead but you could see her still breathing since he had gotten off of her and had some others tie her up so she couldn’t help us.

I got closer to Jacob my heart feeling like it was going to come out of my chest since It was beating so hard. He held onto me tighter. I felt a little safer, but a little wasn’t good enough I wanted to feel like nothing in the world could hurt me now.

Everything that was happening was overwhelming and I couldn’t stand it I didn’t want Kimmie to get hurt. If she wouldn’t have warned me then I would have never known what was going to happen to me. Ever since that I note I thought of her as my gardening angel. And she was. that’s when I realized it, she was an angel sent down from heaven to help me, and nothing was going to stop her. She had god on her side and that’s all that mattered.

I leaped out of Jacobs arms. And ran over to Kimmie I pushed all of those things off of her and pulled her away Jacob ran up behind me just in time to punch Kevin in the face. We ran for the door. I kept telling myself not to look back but I couldn’t help it , I never can. Then that’s when it all starting going downhill again. Fear ran through my body. It was a cold feeling. Like nothing I have ever felt before. Fire came blazing out of the ground. And something was standing in it. Something I thought I would never have to see in my life or death. Something God himself couldn’t help to turn good.

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On March 15th 2008 dangg101 Said :
dangg101 AAAAHHHHHH I FREAKIN LOVE THIS STORY KMP PLEASE YOU ARE A GOOOOOD WRITER
On November 30th 2007 DISxNotorious Said :
DISxNotorious AAAAAAGH!!! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME?!?!
On November 9th 2007 7unicornrings Said :
7unicornrings aaaaaaah! what?! what is it? grrr...lol i loved it! =D