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Live or Die
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My names Hailey. Like most teens my age I’m into a lot of stuff. For instance sneaking out of the house in
the middle of the night to go and hang out with friends down at the gravel pit. Yeah I know its weird but
hey we have a gravel pit that teens go and hang out at and party. One of my closest friends Alex called and
asked if I wanted to go down to the pits and party with her and some of her friends. I said “sure, but I have
to get ready first”. We agreed to meet up in 2 hours at the local gas station. I hung up and went to my
room.I got to my room and sat down at my computer. I signed into my hotmail, and I had a new message. I
didn’t know who the sender was but I still opened it. The message read
“ Hi my name is Kimmie, I don’t mean to scare u but if that what I have to do I will. DO NOT GO TO
THE GRAVEL PITS TONIGHT IF YOU WANT TO LIVE. I mean it something bad is going to happen.
You will meet someone new who will kill you. He will have pitch black eyes and will wear a silver chain
around his neck. Avoid him if your not planning on listening to me. DO NOT TALK TO HIM! This is your
only warning from me. Take it or leave it.
Your Friend,
Kimmie”
I quickly shut my computer screen. Who was this creep? What did she mean by if I want to live? I don’t
even know a Kimmie so how can she be my friend? And how did she know I was even going to the gravel
pits tonight, the only person who knew was Alex. I went to the kitchen and got the phone, I called Alex.
“ring, ring”
“Hello?”
“ Is Alex there?”
“Yeah hang on a sec”
“Hello, who is this?”
“It’s Hailey, I was wondering if u want to just skip the party and go to the movie instead”
“I would but I really am looking forward to this party and plus my crush is going to be there. Why don’t you want to go all of a sudden?”
“ oh, well I just don’t feel like going to the pits tonight but you can still go I’m just going to hang out here maybe watch a movie but have fun”
“ok well talk to you tomorrow, bye”
“Bye”
We hung up. I went back into my room , closed the door, then sat down on my bed. I looked over to wear
I had left my computer, thinking about the email and there on top of my computer sat a white envelope
with my name scribbled on it. I went over picked it up and opened it . Inside was a letter it read
“Hello, nice to meet you my names Kevin, ignore that silly little girl telling you to avoid me. She just has
some issues with me cause of some things that happened but she was asking for it but anyways I’m not a
bad person well if u would call me a person, I’m more of a…well…umm… I don’t really know what I am,
but I wont hurt you I swear. I’ve just kind of been fallowing you around a bit and I’ve grown attached to
you. I’d like to meet you in person….uh.. Face to face if you wouldn’t mind. I’ll see ya around
Your Friend,
Kevin "
Author’s note :tell me what you think plz I’m not really used to writing and this is my first time really posting it so any comments or suggestion’s would be greatly appreciated .
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| On March 8th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is totally original~ I'm definitely looking forward to reading more! |
| On October 16th 2007 halfpint21106 Said : | |
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This is really good it really grabbed my attention can't wait to read more |
| On August 2nd 2007 omfg010203 Said : | |
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good....but yea like they said the writings to litle |
| On July 13th 2007 oreoash Said : | |
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way to small!!!!! i really wnat to know if this kevin is good or bad, for some reason i laughed at the silly litte girl part, lol! |
| On July 10th 2007 jirrith2007 Said : | |
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wow, I really liked it. The font was kinda small and hard to read, but Otherwise it was fine. Plz post another part! |
| On July 10th 2007 Oddessy65 Said : | |
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This is great! Write more and keep me posted pleez!! |
| On July 10th 2007 HolyRoler1516 Said : | |
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Really good writing. Are you Posting a part 2? If so tell mii when you do. ;] |
| On July 10th 2007 meldittrich Said : | |
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This is really good story!!! Keep me posted. Please???? |
| On July 10th 2007 beachparty57 Said : | |
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This was really good i like it alot! Keep me posted! |
| On July 10th 2007 spikies7 Said : | |
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wow that was good i would totally shit myself if i got that e-mail and letter!!! write more please!!! |
| On July 10th 2007 7unicornrings Said : | |
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wow!! that was so awesome!! id be scared shitless if i was her lol it was really good but it could use more detail. other than that it was freakin awesome!! plz write more *puppy dog eyes* i want to know what happens. |


