Created By
Rate this Story
Embed
My Stories
+3
View All
|
+
19
|
my novel... this is just a small section of my book i am writing |
|
+
19
|
my man wrote this to me when i was in the hospital having kaylee |
|
+
21
|
what its like to live with a fucking ghost!!!! |
|
my novel... this is just a small section of my book i am writing
Fiction
 Created on 3-22-07
 Views(224)
 Story Rating G
|
listening to the birds in the giant treetops above me.. the smell of honeysuckle in the air; everytime the wind blows. the sunlight streaming through the new leaves above me; creating a dance of light on the forests floor. the feeling of cool damp leaves underneath me. with beautiful wildflowers pushing their way through them. racing to be the first to have the bright kentucky sun kiss their pedals.
this is my secret place. a place where i can go and be safe. a place away from my alcoholic grandfather. away from my bitch of sister; Dahlia. this is where i feel home. out here in nature.
i remember as i kid, i thought that these woods were magic. the way the leaves would turn colors in fall, the way flower pedals would close right before your eyes, if you looked long enough. i used to lay on the ground, and wait for the sun to go down. i would watch lighteningbugs fly up all around me. they seemed to dance around me. as if they were putting on a show just for me. it was magical back then. i miss those times, where everything seemed so mystical. my life now is far from magic.
i lay quietly waiting for jezebelle. jezzy was my one and only friend in the world. she was a lot like me.
dahlia and the rest of the popular girls in school ridiculed us both everyday. jezzy and i were used to it. we didnt want to be their friend anyway. they were the ones missing out; not us.
every saturday morning i meet jezzy out here in my back woods. if pappy was to see me talking to her, he would surely beat me black and blue. not because she is a bad person. but, because she is black. jezzy and her family are the only black people in our small town. her family is not excepted by anyone here. jezzys mother is a psychic. so that dosent help much with their reputation of being evil devil people as pappy joe calls them. if he ever was to find out that i go
to jezzys house every saturday, i think he would literally kill me.
i closed my eyes, and must have fallen asleep, because the next thing i knew jezzy was standing over me, out of breath, her dress torn, with a look of terror on her face.
i could have never predicted what would soon happen to me. not even jezzys momma could have predicted what was to come. my life would soon
be changed forever.
this is my secret place. a place where i can go and be safe. a place away from my alcoholic grandfather. away from my bitch of sister; Dahlia. this is where i feel home. out here in nature.
i remember as i kid, i thought that these woods were magic. the way the leaves would turn colors in fall, the way flower pedals would close right before your eyes, if you looked long enough. i used to lay on the ground, and wait for the sun to go down. i would watch lighteningbugs fly up all around me. they seemed to dance around me. as if they were putting on a show just for me. it was magical back then. i miss those times, where everything seemed so mystical. my life now is far from magic.
i lay quietly waiting for jezebelle. jezzy was my one and only friend in the world. she was a lot like me.
dahlia and the rest of the popular girls in school ridiculed us both everyday. jezzy and i were used to it. we didnt want to be their friend anyway. they were the ones missing out; not us.
every saturday morning i meet jezzy out here in my back woods. if pappy was to see me talking to her, he would surely beat me black and blue. not because she is a bad person. but, because she is black. jezzy and her family are the only black people in our small town. her family is not excepted by anyone here. jezzys mother is a psychic. so that dosent help much with their reputation of being evil devil people as pappy joe calls them. if he ever was to find out that i go
to jezzys house every saturday, i think he would literally kill me.
i closed my eyes, and must have fallen asleep, because the next thing i knew jezzy was standing over me, out of breath, her dress torn, with a look of terror on her face.
i could have never predicted what would soon happen to me. not even jezzys momma could have predicted what was to come. my life would soon
be changed forever.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On May 11th 2007 chassratliff2 Said : | |
|
hey its good. needs a little work. sounds pretty darn close to a movie i seen tho. not an original i mean it might be yours but it sounds too much like something else. good tho. let us read some more!! |
| On April 16th 2007 Blueismybaby Said : | |
|
wow. I am really curious to read more. plz write more or post more!! |
| On April 14th 2007 blondemoment22 Said : | |
|
I like it, write more. |
| On April 3rd 2007 MagicHannah Said : | |
|
Nice, I wanna here the rest!! |
| On March 24th 2007 hillbilleechic Said : | |
|
hey thanks babe. i didnt know htat was you that i was goin off on in the chat room lol im sorry lol |
| On March 23rd 2007 hillbilleechic Said : | |
|
|
HEY SWEEETIE THANKS! YOU ARE SO DAMN SWEEET! HEHEHE THIS IS NT "FROM" MY STORY, JUST WHAT I COULD REMEMBER REALLY QUICK THE OTHER NIGHT. I AM PREOUD OF IT SO FAR. ITS PRETTY GOOD. EVERYONE THAT READS IT ARE BEGGIN ME TO HURRY AND WRITE MORE. LOL |
| On March 22nd 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
|
Hey, good beginning. You should type up your story and post it, I'd like to read it. |
| On March 22nd 2007 hillbilleechic Said : | |
|
|
hey thanks! i just wrote this really quick last night.. its not anything from my book, its just what i could remember really quick.. but its kinda close. thanks so much for reading! and commenting. if you have anything for me to read, let me know k? thanks yall |
| On March 22nd 2007 pammyhypha Said : | |
|
|
I think the story sounds interesting despite the fact that you need to work on your punctuation and sentence structure. |
| On March 22nd 2007 donnaforce06 Said : | |
|
|
you know how to grab the attention of the reader |
