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Passionate love
Romance
 Created on 8-14-07
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 Story Rating G
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A bright moon broke through the clouds, lighting the sky for some reason I have never seen the sky this beautiful. I went through my room and headed for the door to the outside looking down the stairs I saw my father “father what are you doing up? You should be a sleep you have a big day tomorrow it’s your birthday” I said “yes my child I am getting old aren’t I? I wanted to see u, tomorrow is also going to be your chance to find a husband my dear” my father said “but father” no my dear no buts we have waited long enough u well find a young man tomorrow” that’s all he said and then he left for his room. There was a reason I did not want to find a husband I was in love the type of love u can’t explain but only feel. That night I left the house and went to his home “David, open the door it’s me April” “hello my love” David opened the door and said, “we have to tell father about us first thing tomorrow he wants me to find a husband at his party I cant lose you David” “u wont my love can you stay tonight” “yes” he placed his soft tender lips on hers and kissed her passionately while his strong hands caressed her body and her white milky breast squeezed against his hard male body she felt his male hardness stiffened on her as he placed her to the floor and took of her garments they heard the rain coming down which mad him want her more. As he placed his penis in to her she could do nothing but scream out “DAVID!!!!!” he felt shocked and asked “sweetheart am I hurting you” “no my love make love to me” as they had strong and passionate love on the floor all she did was morn of his greatness there was no-one that could make her feel like he could .She slept there that night and thinking of how to approach her father the following day. When they awoke she dressed her self and he his when she left it was still dark so she could reach back to the castle without any one seeing her but the guards. While she dressed her self for her father’s birthday it was annoyed she had a visitor when he came in it was David she asked her maids to leave leavening only herself and him they thought about how to approach her father (the king).On her way down the stairs they went straight to the thorn “father I have something to say” To find out if she told him r not wait till I finish the next chapter
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On August 18th 2007 xoxdanicaxox Said : | |
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great story. also, you should fix the grammer too and maybe make the writing smaller? |
| On August 16th 2007 maybesomeday91 Said : | |
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I liked it..but you could put more discriptions in it..like decribe the father..since you talk about him getting older, maybe add that his hair is graying or something..I like detail. But, it is your work, do your own thing. Other then that i'd clean up the grammer and stuff so it's a little easier to read. |
| On August 14th 2007 WaitingAlone Said : | |
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love it, really good. plz keep me posted |
| On August 14th 2007 metal4lifebaby Said : | |
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love it keep me posted plz |
| On August 14th 2007 foxridergirl09 Said : | |
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i lvoe it keep me posted
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| On August 14th 2007 lvm3932 Said : | |
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wow that was simple but cool keep me posted |
| On August 14th 2007 papeter2 Said : | |
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i like it =) |
| On August 14th 2007 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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yeah i agree with oreoash but keep me posted on the next one! |
| On August 14th 2007 oreoash Said : | |
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nice, bit confusing at times though. Use more periods and comma's. Otherwise good job, cant wait to see what they tell him |
| On August 14th 2007 saraann1127 Said : | |
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Nice writing! |
