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Creative Created on 4-27-08 Views(97) Story Rating G

                            Paint me invisible   

    It was a bright sunny day out. It was a friday,and Allie had just gotten out of school. On her way home she felt someone grab her shoulder,turning out to be just Peter, Allies boyfriend. Peter was 17,Allie was 14; for a fourteen year old,she was experienced. You see, from the time Allie was four,Until the current time. Allie's mom has had more men in and out of her house then a tool shop. Allie's father left when she was three years old. He finally broke down and said he wasn't ready to be a father. So from the time she was four until now, Allie has had other men her mother has dated come in,just saying they wanted to play a little game. and then leaving Allie there,feeling used and unwanted. Just laying there.

Allie had hated her life from the time she was 8,just about the time she finally started realizing what they were actually doing to her. But when she met Peter,she swears her life changed. But when really,he was just like all the others. And Peter? was one of them. 

Peter and Allie had gone of since she was 12 and he was 15. For about a year,it worked. And then all of a sudden,things stopped. Peter done what he promised not too, he hit her; he raped her. But why was this so bad? its happened a dozen other times before? Peter was someone Allie loved and she refused to let anyone tell her different. She was in love,and that was all that mattered.

 

*ah,i don't know why this is so short,i'm having a hard time with this. lemme know what ya think.* 

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