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Hell's Cabin. (Part Four) |
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Hell's Cabin. (Part Three) |
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Hell's Cabin. (Part Two) |
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Hell's Cabin. (Part One) |
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Hell's Cabin. (Part Four)
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"Get inside!"
"But..."
"Get inside, Judy!"
The figure was speeding up now. A sound came from in, it was not human...or animal.
Judy ran inside the cabin.
"Jessy, Carly! Get down here!"
Judy looked out the window, watching her lover fight this mad man.
"Judy, what is it?"
"Get the knife!"
"What the fuck is going on!?"
Cody's screams of pain answered them.
"Cody!"
The looked out the window, Cody was now in two piecs.
"CODY!!"
"Jesus Christ!"
Judy was frantic. The figure stood and slowly walked into the lamp's light outside.
None of them could control thier screams when it walked into the light. It had no skin, only mucle and exposed organs. It's eye's were as red as blood finger nails at least a foot long and teeth that had to be four inches long. I grinned at them with bloody teeth and held up Cody's eye. The creature opened it's mouth and chomped on Cody's eye. Judy vomited.
"Upstaris, both of you!"
Jessy began pushing furniture against the door. Carly and Judy did not ask any qestions.
Both girls wept shuddering together in the closet.
"What was that thing?"
"I don't know."
"Listen."
Downstaris they could hear banging and the crashing of wood.
"COME GET SOME MOTHER FUCKER!!"
A sound of a fight could be heard. Jessy screamed in pain. A monsterous growl was heard and Jessy's screams ended.
"Jessy..."
"Carly listen."
"Jessy!"
Judy knew what she was going to do.
"Don't leave stay here."
"JESSY!!"
Carly ran downstaris and screamed. Judy could not do a thing but listen to her friend being eaten. The sound of flesh peeling and that thing burping made her want to let go of her sainity.
"And now...for the main course"
Judy heard loud footsteps. It was coming for her. She grabbed a coat hanger and twisted it into a sharp thread. The creature pounded and crashed through the closet doors. She rammed the hanger into it's eye. The screams that followed were not human. It ripped out the hanger and glared at her. Pus and ooze poured from it's eye socket.
"Bitch!"
Judy had no choice, she jumped out the window.
Her leg was broken. She had to continue on. The creature apeared around the corner and threw her against the side of the cabin. Judy knew her life would end here. The creature raised it's axe.
"Stay out of Hell's Cabin."
The axe came foreword and then Judy's alarm clock woke her up.
It was all a dream...after having it she did not want to go with her friends to this cabin. She called Cody.
"Hello?"
"Cody! Oh thank, God! You're alive."
"What?"
"Never mind, um about that trip."
"Yeah, Jessy canceld it."
"Why?"
"Read the paper, listen I got to go."
He hung up and Judy went to the Kitchen.
"Morning, Mother."
She didn't answer just continued making eggs.
Judy picked up the paper and began to read through it...her heat stoped.
"Pollice Officer found slain! Campus shut down!"
The head line was a punch in the face.
"M-m-mom?"
"Welcome to Hell's Cabin."
Judy looked at her Mother, her face had been ripped off and the creature was standing behind her. Judy's screams filled the house.
Hope you enjoyed the story, I compleatly though of it on my own. 
Comments
| On July 8th 2008 xxxshylaxxx Said: |
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| i love it!!!!!!!!! plz kmp!!!!!!!!!! |
| On July 7th 2008 yeaitzJess Said: |
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| wow im really creeped out right now. . . . . |
| On July 6th 2008 rosebrugh Said: |
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| i loved it and i so didnt think that was a dream!you are a good writer!:} kmpp |
| On July 5th 2008 StarrburstBaby Said: |
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| Oh Mann, I love it. It has the best ending.
I was right.
Your a amazing writer:) |


