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Hell's Cabin. (Part One)

Tragedy Created on 7-4-08 Views(95) Story Rating R

Summer vacation, the perfect time for friends to hang out together.  No school, no parents, no rules.  Judy was the first one to arive at the park.  It was a nice day out, the sun was shining, birds were in the air, people were laughing.  Judy was going to be a Senior after Summer, she was happy about that, but more happy about the trip to the cabin she had reserved with her friends.  Three months out of the city and just peace and quiet.  Just her and her boyfriend Cody along with Carly, her boyfriend Jessy.

"Judy!"
It was Cody, he ran up to Judy and hugged.
"Sorry I kept you waiting.  Where's Carly, and Jess?"
"Not here yet."
Cody's face showed worry.
"Oh, relax!  They said they might be late."
"I know that, I just want to get there to..."
Cody paused.
"...have fun!"
Judy playfully hit his arm and laughed.
"You horn dog!"
"I am."
They both laughed.  Judy stared in Cody's eyes.  They were as blue as the ocean, and showed love and passion.

"Hey, lovebirds!"
Jessy pulled up in his SUV with Carly. 
"We gonna' get going, or you two gonna' stay here and fuck in public?"
"We're coming."
Judy and Cody put thier gear in the back and they got in.
"About
time."
"Sorry, Cody.  Me and Jess had to...fix somethings."
"Ugh."
They all headed out, laughing.

Five hours later Jessy's SUV pulled up into the cabin's gravel parking way.
"Well, we're here!"
"Let's go, Jess.  I wanna' try out the hot tub they have in the back."
"Me too."
Jessy and Carly both laughed, and kissed.
"Jess, keep your dick in your pants and help me here!"
"Sure thing."

Judy walked up to the room where Cody and her would be staying.  It was a small room, but it was better then nothing.  It had two beds that could be pushed to form one...she would do that later. 
"Judy!"
"Yes?"
"Come look at this!"
"Comming!"

Jessy and Cody were outside standind around the wood pile.
"Look."
Judy saw what they were looking at...blood and lots of it.
"So, some animal must have been hurt and crawled in there."
Judy was never worried at things like this.
"No."
Jessy replied.
"My father is in C.S.I., you can tell it's human blood by the color and the way it has spread over the wood.  It allmost looks like a splatter."
"Oh, Jess!"
"I'm not kidding, Judy."
"Well, it's allmost dark, let's go inside."
As they headed in, they did not notice the shadow that had been watching them since thier arival.

"Mmmm, Judy.  You make one hell of a cup of coffee."
"Thank's."
They all sat around, enjoying the fire pit.   Judy and Cody snuggled together in Judy's sleeping bag. 
"What?  Allready?  Wait till me and Carly leave at least!"
"Oh, Jess.  Stop it."
"It's okay, Carly."
Carly and Jessy huddled together under a blanket that Jessy had brought.
"Too bad we don't have and marshmellows.  We could have smores!"
"I brought some!"
"Great!  I'll go get them."
Carly got up and went inside.  The other's sat outside enjoying the night air and the fire pit.
"What is that?"
Jessy got up.
"What?"
"That."
Jessy pointed to a shadow next to a tree.
"Could be a deer."
"A deer that stands."
Jessy started to walk tword the shadow when Carly's scream from inside the cabin made them all turn.

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On July 5th 2008 rosebrugh Said: 
rosebrugh she found a body.kmpp