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pickles girly girl. =D [chap. 2]

Creative Created on 4-27-08 Views(72) Story Rating G

I rode my skateboard for the longest time. I felt my phone vibrating against my pocket and took it out the caller ID said, ::MUM:: i rolled  my eyes and sighed, I stopped my skateboard and flipped it open. I immediately heard shouting. "OPEN THIS DOOR NOW YOUNG LADY! I WILL NOT STAND IN THE HALLWAY POUNDING WHILE WE HAVE GUESTS!" I said, "Chill woman, I'm not even there. I'm boarding. So I'll be home in a few." and then just to soften her up I said, "Love ya, bye" and shtu the phone without her reply. I finally realized how long I'd been gone, and just how far I had rode away from home. I was still familiar with my surroundings, so I walked to the sub station and got on a subway train. It was very crowded in there, but I managed to get a seat. Just as the train was about to pull away, this really wierd guy sat beside me. I looked at him and said, "Hi." then I slid over away from him and placed my bookbag between us. The train started to go and all was well until the lights inside flickered, then all went out. It was so unreal. A loud voice came on the intercom. It said this, "YOU ARE ALL IN DANGER. UNLESS YOU WANT TO DIE, GO TO THE SECTION YOU ARE ADVISED. HILDREN AND PARENTS GO TO SECTION 1, SENIORS 2, PEOPLE BETWEEN THE AGES OF 30-59 GO TO SECTION 3, PEOPLE IN THEIR 20'S GO TO SECTION 4,AND ALL PEOPLE BETWEEN 14-19 GO TO SECTION 5. THANK YOU FOR YOUR COOPERATION. OF YOU AREN'T IN THE SECTION DIRECTED WITH IN 3 MINUTES, THE TRAIN WILL BE STOPPED. "

And the lights came back on, Everyone looked shocked and then the guy beside me pulled out a gun and said, "You heard him move it!" And everyone began to scurry to a different part of the train. I ran to section 5 and got there probably within 1 minute tops. As soon as everyone got to their section a bunch of crazy people began to pray and scream their heads off. I had the biggest urge to laugh, they were such spazzes! then the lights went back out and i felt a big swoosh of air as the intercom turned back on and said for everyone, even if this wasnt their stop. I ran out the doors  and didnt look back.

 

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I ran inside the house and dramatically collapsed on the floor and waited for someone to ask what happened. My mum walked by and said, "Get up! We have company in the living room." I got up and dusted myself off. I strutted in and in a French accent said, "Why hellooo my darlings.." I stopped when I saw the neighbors there, I said, "Hey we met! T'sup? " "Nothing much." replied Matt. The parents didnt reply, as their eyes were glued to the television screen. It was the news. On the TV was I video of the subway station, and people getting off. It showed ME unboarding the train and running in a rush of people!! I yelled "SHITT!" When did I yell that? But they bleeped it out so you couldnt hear  it that good. I turned red and said, "Yeah,... some crazy guys were kinda on the train and made us move around and some people were creaming and praying and I tought I was gonna die but then they stopped the train and I got off and ran home the rest of the way..." My mum looked shocked and ran up to me, grabbing my shoulders and looking me up and down. She said,"Awwm baby! Are you alright?" And then hugged me.

I said, "Soo...yeah. When's dinner? I'm starved."

We ate food quietly and very awkward until me and Matt made silly convo. After that we went to the living room and our parents sat in what they called the "parlor" chatting. I talked to Matt about stuff, like school and whatnot. Our conversation was like this;

ME: Soo, some hectic afternoon huh?

MATT: yeah. ya sure ur okay??

ME: ttly, im fine.

MATT: good, good.

ME: so what grade r u in?

MATT: im going into my junior year.

ME: cool, me too.

MATT: yup. what school do you go to?

ME: Eh, Madison Academy.

MATT: Im going there too.

ME: then we can chill and see if we have clases together I guess.

MATT: totally.

 

Then afterward I was getting reallllyy tired  and the Prudinsky-Handers left.

I fell asleep on the couch.

SRRY IF THIS IS TOOO LONG, PART 3 WILL BE UP SHORTLY PLZ RATE && COMMENT!!

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