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Fallen Angel chapter 1

Creative Created on 3-20-08 Views(34) Story Rating G

I lazily rolled to my side, amused by the fact that the head angel of my sector had not come to get me for breakfest. My hand brushed up against something rough and I sat up with a fright. I let out a small shriek realizing I was not where I should be. I looked up and saw the clouds above me causing confusing to wash over me. What has happend?  I was so deep in though I did not see the person in front of me.

"You look lost." I looked up. An older man was standing in front of me. He was wearing a black leather jacket and blue jeans. "and possibly cold." Then I relized I had on a white dress that came down to my knees.  His smile was frightening.

"Yes sir, yes I believe I am lost." I stood up, and stumbled slightly, not use to using my own two legs without the help of my wings. I gasped as I then noticed that they were not there anymore. I then looked to the man who was at least a head taller than me.

"Maybe you would like to come with me so we can find out where you belong." He grabbed my arm and started to pull me along.

"Excuse me." I said agitated. "I do not wish to go with you." I pulled away, only causing his grip to tighten. "Sir, let me go or else I shall have to call for the Constable to come." I felt my pale arm already starting to bruise.

The man grunted at my mention of the Constable. "Lady there is no one here, your on your own."

I'm on Earth when I'm suppose to be up in the Heavens, and already a man is trying to steal me away. My eyes were brimming on the edge of tears when I fell to the ground as the man released me. I glance up to see him being punched by the boy that I saw before falling. I let my head drop and stared at the green grass.  A shadow overcast me as the boy kneeled next to me. "Are you okay?" his voice was low and soothing.

A tear rolled down my cheek as I replied. "Sir, I really do not know anymore. Things just seem to be ever so horribly wrong." The boy's fingers gently brushed against my skin wiping away my stray tear. I shrank back a little causing him to pull his hand away quickly.

"Sorry." He mumbled obviously embarrased.

"No need to apologize." I whispered unable to catch my breath. "I am just unaccustomed to touch, it's been a long while." He laughed at this.  My cheeks flared red, and I was glad that my blonde white waist length hair hung in front of my face.

"You talk very strangly." He said to me. I was the one to laugh then. I looked up into his brown eyes and imediatly stopped. "My names Blake Morgan."

"It's a pleasure to meet you Mr. Morgan. I am Miss. Beauty Fire." I replied. Blake looked me up and down once. His eyes never lingered anywhere to long.

"Beauty your name fits your perfectly." He smiled as did I. "It's as if your a fallen angel from the heavens above." It started to sprinkle as he said this. "Your white blonde hair. Your translucently pale skin. And your blue-grey eyes."  Tears started to cascade down my cheeks. Blake had no clue as to how right he was.  "Oh no, I didn't mean that badly." He said worridly. "No please, don't cry. Here." He said standing up. He reached down and helped me up as well. "I will take you to your house, so everything will be alright." He smiled trying to comfort me, but he only caused a more tears.

"I'm s-sorry." I cried. "Its j-just I don't know w-why I-Im here. Or w-where I'm s-s-suppose to go." I covered my face not wanting him to see me in dismay.

"You can come to my apartment then Beauty. I will get you some hot cocoa and you can sit by the fire if you want?" he was trying desperatly to get me happy. I wiped my eyes, and looked at him.

"Mr. Blake." I gathered myself the best I could. "That would be very pleasing." I wiped my eyes one last time and took Blakes out streched hand. " Just  promise me that your not like that guy." I pointed disdainfully at the man laying near us.

"If I was anything like him, I would ask you to shot me." He laughed, and we started to walk.

So many thoughts were going through my mind, but I knew I had to go with him. He made me fall.

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On March 21st 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 "If I was anything like him, I would ask you to shot me." He laughed, and we started to walk. ** shoot.
other than that...good.
On March 21st 2008 ChaseCooper432 Said :
ChaseCooper432 kmp plz