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Fallen Angel (prolouge)

Creative Created on 3-19-08 Views(39) Story Rating G

I can't exactly tell you when I arrived up here in this strange place you call Heaven, but I can tell you I have been here for awhile. Everyday there was a new adventure waiting for me which made me content to be here till no end. Things were always be unraveled here, I did not know why I hadn't gone on to another life, only that I still had a great task still ahead for me.

Two weeks ago, on a Saturday afternoon I was lazily flying around in the clouds with some of the other girls my age when I spotted a young boy standing alone on a basketball court in a park. My friends called for me to catch up, but I stayed and decided to watch.

His eye's were dark, and he seemed so lost in thought that he didn't even notice that is was starting to get dark out. He wore shorts, and a plain white shirt. His brown hair was being tousled by the wind, causing him to look more depressing than he was. My heart ached for him. I yearned to go and give him a hug, but I couldn't.  

It was late, and I was sure to get in trouble by the almight one, but it was hard to leave. With one final glance I pushed off the cloud and intended to fly back towards the cental area. Something was wrong. I could not move my wings. I yelled out in shock, and started to fall threw the air.  I was plumtting to the Earth. With a final gasp I landed in a heap next to a large oak tree. I closed my eyes and darkness over came my body.

This is the journey of Beauty Fire.  She has not been on earth for over a hundered years. Will you join her on her quest to find the mysterious boy and to find out the mystery of her death? Follow Beauty on her long journey of up's, down's, happiness, sadness, and anything else you could think of.

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