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The Woman Named Titanic
Romance
 Created on 3-16-08
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 Story Rating G
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1ST Class
Alissa marveled over the wonderful pearl necklace.
“I love it” she said. “You shouldn’t have”
“Ah but I should” he said.
Alissa still stunned by the necklace kept walking with her husband. They saw many other first class passengers but not many second class passengers. Though they did sometimes explore.
Finally they felt the ship take off. It happened so suddenly that Cole fell. But they kept walking. Finally they reached their room. There were 3 beds. Also a couch and bathroom.
After they unpacked Benny and Cole left to put there valuables in the safe down in the checking area.
“ Now Billy, Sarah I’m going to go and say hi to other first class passengers okay?” she said.
“Yes mommy” they said in a drag voice.
She walked out of the room. She walked almost the length of 1st class when she saw her friend Betty Winfeld.
“Hi Betty” she said. “ Why are you packing up?”
“BECAUSE WE ALMOST HAD AN ACCIDENT!” she screamed. Alissa looked blank. “The ship almost hit another little ship. So I now think the Titan is true”.
Without another word she stormed away.
Alissa was stunned, but she kept on walking. She then bumped into Archibald Butt. He was very tall with a thick brown mustache.
“Hi Mr. Butt” she said.
“Ahhh Hello Madame Baxter” he said “How’s Benny doing”
“Good”
“I am about to leave to go to see the captain, would you like to come“.
“Yes” she said at once.
“I’m sure I’ll enjoy your company”.
So they walked down the first class promenade. They saw First Officer Murdoch and Second Officer Lightoller.
“Hello Murdoch, Lightoller” said Butt
“Hello Archibald” said Murdoch. He just glared at Alissa.
“Hello Mr. Butt, is Taft sending you on the ship, or a vacation?” said Lightoller
Alissa was stunned, but she kept on walking. She then bumped into Archibald Butt. He was very tall with a thick brown mustache.
“Hi Mr. Butt” she said.
This made Alissa feel a lot better. She new Butt was a kind and generous man. So they continued to walk. Murdoch’s words just echoed in her head. “He is so pathetic”. She could not get them out
After a while they ran into Molly Brown. She was short and had golden rings on most fingers.
“Well what a nice surprise to see you Mr. Butt, and Mrs. Baxter. Uahhh what a delight” she said in a kind voice.
“We were just on our way to see the Captain Smith” said Butt. “Would you like to come?”
“Heavens no, the captain doesn’t want to see me. I’ll just go my room. Good-bye”. She then walked off
Butt and Alissa continued to walk to the Captains quarters.
Alissa marveled over the wonderful pearl necklace.
“I love it” she said. “You shouldn’t have”
“Ah but I should” he said.
Alissa still stunned by the necklace kept walking with her husband. They saw many other first class passengers but not many second class passengers. Though they did sometimes explore.
Finally they felt the ship take off. It happened so suddenly that Cole fell. But they kept walking. Finally they reached their room. There were 3 beds. Also a couch and bathroom.
After they unpacked Benny and Cole left to put there valuables in the safe down in the checking area.
“ Now Billy, Sarah I’m going to go and say hi to other first class passengers okay?” she said.
“Yes mommy” they said in a drag voice.
She walked out of the room. She walked almost the length of 1st class when she saw her friend Betty Winfeld.
“Hi Betty” she said. “ Why are you packing up?”
“BECAUSE WE ALMOST HAD AN ACCIDENT!” she screamed. Alissa looked blank. “The ship almost hit another little ship. So I now think the Titan is true”.
Without another word she stormed away.
Alissa was stunned, but she kept on walking. She then bumped into Archibald Butt. He was very tall with a thick brown mustache.
“Hi Mr. Butt” she said.
“Ahhh Hello Madame Baxter” he said “How’s Benny doing”
“Good”
“I am about to leave to go to see the captain, would you like to come“.
“Yes” she said at once.
“I’m sure I’ll enjoy your company”.
So they walked down the first class promenade. They saw First Officer Murdoch and Second Officer Lightoller.
“Hello Murdoch, Lightoller” said Butt
“Hello Archibald” said Murdoch. He just glared at Alissa.
“Hello Mr. Butt, is Taft sending you on the ship, or a vacation?” said Lightoller
Alissa was stunned, but she kept on walking. She then bumped into Archibald Butt. He was very tall with a thick brown mustache.
“Hi Mr. Butt” she said.
This made Alissa feel a lot better. She new Butt was a kind and generous man. So they continued to walk. Murdoch’s words just echoed in her head. “He is so pathetic”. She could not get them out
After a while they ran into Molly Brown. She was short and had golden rings on most fingers.
“Well what a nice surprise to see you Mr. Butt, and Mrs. Baxter. Uahhh what a delight” she said in a kind voice.
“We were just on our way to see the Captain Smith” said Butt. “Would you like to come?”
“Heavens no, the captain doesn’t want to see me. I’ll just go my room. Good-bye”. She then walked off
Butt and Alissa continued to walk to the Captains quarters.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On March 16th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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"the woman anmed titanic"? its gonna be pretty hard to fit all those people on you. |
| On March 16th 2008 CaPlanePourToi Said : | |
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It's mostly dialogue. Try more description. But it's interesting so far. |
| On March 16th 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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kmp plz |
