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My Immortal Love {1}

Romance Created on 2-25-08 Views(244) Story Rating G

   Veronica swiftly flipped the thug who was following her over her back.  He landed with a thud on the pavement, and when he tried to get up, she kicked him in the head.
   "Who are you?  And why are you following me?" she questioned looking down at the middle-aged pathetic littile man below her.  His hair was thinning, and he was at least fifty pounds over weight.  Her lips curled in disgust.
   "Mmmf," he grumbled something unintelligable and his eyes darted to the left and right as if he could escape from her and the darkened alley.
   "No ones going to come to your rescue," Veronica taunted.  She crouched down by him, "Now tell me your name."
   "It's, i-it's Dimitri," the puny man said while licking his lips nervously.
   Leaning back on her heels, Veronica waited for more information, while glaring meaningfully at him.
   Since it seemed that she wasn't going to get anymore information but that without a little influence, so she whipped out a knife and gently pressed it to the mans neck.  She leaned in towards his face and whispered, " As long as you tell me what I need to know, you're not going to get hurt.  Who paid you?"
   "Christ lady, I gots a family and kids!  It was one of those things that payed me," he licked his lips again, "Ya know, them bloodsuckers.  They paid me a tidy sum t'stalk ya."
   "Which ones?" Veronica demanded and she lightly applied pressure to the knife causing a thin line of red to show. 
   "That's enough!" said a loud male voice from behind her.  Veronica quickly whirled around to face one of the most gorgeous, and potentially most dangerous looking man she'd ever seen.
   "What-" She started to question him, but never got the chance as Dimitri, taking advantage of her momentary weakness yanked her leg so hard, that she fell down.  Being preoccupied with getting up, she didn't notice that Dimitri was gone until she had stood up.
   "Dang! You made me lose him!"  She looked accusingly at her handsome intruder.  He had cole black shaggy hair, plump lips, a body most men would kill for, and hypnotizing midnight black eyes.  Oh, she thought, you could just drown in those eyes.  With some suprise, she caught herself daydreaming about what she would do to this mysterious man, and narrowed her eyes.  She looked at him warily.
   "Are you done?" the intruder asked, his mouth quirked with amusement.
   Veronica chose to ignore his baiting and instead asked, "Who the hell are you, and why did you interfere?"
   "I came here to keep you from killing the scum bag that just fled, among other reasons that I would prefer not to discuss in this alley," he started to walk towards her, but she stopped him with a glare.
   "First it's none of your business whether I kill scum like him, and second, who the hell are you?" she replied flipping her pin straight, waist length raven black hair behind her, and shooting daggers through her midnight blue eyes.
   "First, it is my business," he answered her while advancing on her, "Because I'm going to be your immortal protector and lover."
   Veronica's eyebrows shot up, but as she began to respond he cut her off.
   "And from the looks of you," he took a slow assessment of black leather clad outfit, and then pierced her eyes with his, and slowly licked his lips, "I'm going to enjoy it very much."

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