Forgiveness(intro)

A long time ago, there was a young princess born in a land of death and sarrow. She longed for a time that the sun would shine and the people of her land to be happy. For as long as any one can remember, the land was covered in shadows and the sun never shined. The princess prayed the time of war would end and bring her people home to their families. Birds never sing and animals are scarce, the world around her was dead. The princess Luna, had prayed to God to bring peace and love into her kingdom, but on day she gave up on her God. Her father wished for a better life for his daughter, driving him to arrange a marriage to a prince in a far away kingdom. Luna didn't like the idea of an arranged marriage, and so when the her carrage arrived they found the princess to be gone. After her disaperance, the world grew even darker and colder than before. What will happen to the lands now that all hope is gone from the very people who live there?

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