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Breaking Point

Creative Created on 5-11-08 Views(55) Story Rating G

Glass litered the floor as blood mixed with tears stained my shirt and the white carpet beneath me. "Oh stop your crying!" Jake snapped as he threw his beer bottle on the floor. "just go! I dont want to see you again!" I screamed as hurt clouded his eyes and he smacked me. "Don't say that Cyndi. You know you love me." He sneered as i carefully rubbed the whelp that was beginnning to form on my cheek.

He finally left the room as i stood up on my badly bruised legs and headed to the bathroom. I stepped into the tile shower and turned on the water not caring if it was hot or cold. I stripped down and slowly backed into the water. The cold, coll rythme of the streams of water calmed me as i knew there had to be another way through this than how i had been dealing with it.

I stepped out into the air as a cool breeze sent shivers down my spine as i knew he would be waiting for me when i got out of the bathroom. "No! This is where i break! I'm not taking this anymore!" I said bravely as i came out and saw him seating on the bed as the smell of beer and liquor was strong. "Sit down." He commanded as i stared hard at him.

"Not until i get dressed." I said trying to sound brave but it only came out in a pathedic squeak. "What did you say?" He asked as his hands squeazed the bottle tighter. "Wait until i get dressed." I said as he got up, looking at me with puire hatred he grinned. "You want to be that way huh?" He said slyly as he threw the bottle at me, narrowly missing my hand. 

He charged at me as i stood there defensless. I didnt have time to think because the next thing i knew i woke up staring at the ceiling in the hospitial.

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On May 12th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott ur a good writer plzzzzzz KMP
On May 11th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 you are a fairly good writer... all i have to say is that you should add more to a chapter. this isn't even a page whereas mine are at least 5-8 pages.