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The Devil's Son

Creative Created on 5-10-08 Views(102) Story Rating G

Every since i was put on this Earth i had a calling.I was different because i was not made from a man nor a woman. I was mmade by the devil himself. My blood did not turn red once it hit the air in fact i never bled. I discovered this all when i happened to turn 18...

"Hey Jake!" Cathy screamed as she thrw her arms around me and gave me a friendly hug. "Hey. So where's Cyndi?" I asked looking anxiously around for my girlfriend. "I dunno,. I'd go check in the luggage department." She said shrugging her shoulders as she made her way through the large unusual crowd.

I brushed a lock of black hair from my face as my green eyes searched for her. "Hey Cyndi!" I yelled as i ran through the crowd and came face- to-face with the strangest man ever. He had curly red hair and he was short. He only came up to my hips. He had on all red and his eyes seemed to glow with hatred as he stood there looking at me.

"You shall not live! You are MY slave and will stay that way!" He screamed as i suddenly knew what he was talking about. Noone else saw him because he was only visible to me. "I shall never return to hell! I will relive my life and if you get in my way i will see to it that your are killed by father!" I shouted as his eyes glazed over and fear clouded them."Then shall it be." he said coldly as a black hole appeared beneathe him as I continued to Cyndi.

Should i continue? Tell me and i will also if you want me 2 keep u posted plz tell me!!

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On May 21st 2008 Djshadownite Said :
Djshadownite PLease continue. I'm interested now. Kmpp =)
On May 12th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x kmp!
On May 12th 2008 PinkSlushies12 Said :
PinkSlushies12 kool, I like it, Please Keep Me Posted!
On May 12th 2008 jwoody1980 Said :
my picture
its a good idea maybe a little work the story might be a little better
On May 11th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex scary lol
On May 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Kmpp
On May 11th 2008 McRrOxMySoX8 Said :
McRrOxMySoX8 This is so awesome!!!!!
On May 11th 2008 Slackee Said :
Slackee Wow! It's awesome!
On May 11th 2008 feather1904 Said :
feather1904 there r some pics of the characters on my profile if u would like 2 see wat they look like thx ~Destiny~
On May 10th 2008 gaia17 Said :
gaia17 damn. that's awesome. ^^
On May 10th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott ohhhhhhhhhh continue plzzzzzzzzz KMPP