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Fallen Angel 4

Creative Created on 4-16-08 Views(64) Story Rating G

"Look what you did!" He screamed at me as i trembled in horror and then relized my plans.  "Oh well you'll live!" I said as he looked taken aback. "Hey sweetie." I said knowing my gruesome appearance probably scared her. "W-who are y-you?" She asked as she looked at the bullet hole inbedded in my head. "I am a fallen angel." I said trying not to scare her too much. "What are you doing here?" She asked me as Dark motioned for me to come stand by him.

"No!She needs to know!" I said my face redening in anger as i remembered what he came here for. "Look don't listen to that guy." I said motioning to my "boss". "So what are you?" She asked curiously as she looked at me and grimanced. "Like i said i am a Fallen Angel. This is what happens when you give up on your life," I said pointing to the hole in my head. "Don't listen to anybody. They are losers. You have better things to waste your time on." I said trying to show her i didnt want her to end up the same way i did.

"But why not? I mean doesn't the whole world judge you?" She asked me her blue eyes sparkingly with curiousity as i looked over a Dark. "Yes,yes it does. But you really don't care about who says your ugly or you should just get a life. You'll find friends like i have." I said slipping my cold hands into Dark's hands. "Ok. But why are you here?" She pressed as she looked at the odd people standing before her.

"To take your life." Dark said softly as she looked from me to him in fear of what was going to happen next. "Well he is." I said coldly as i put my hand on her shoulder. "But don't worry. Just whatever you do don't kill yourself." I said as i began to walk away. "Wait!How can i get through this without ya'll?" She yelled as i turned to her my curls swing on my shoulders as i looked at her and answered."With friends. I promise i will come to visit you soon!" I called as i grabbed Dark and headed off towards the woods.

"That was amazing!" Dark said running up behind me, his clothes dark and bloody trailing behind him. "Yeah, but it was the opposite of what we were suppose to do." I said quietly as Dark suddenly turned toward me. "So, how did you end up here?" I asked as he slowly got in my face. "That's none of your buisness! Now thanks to you we can't go back!" He screamed as he looked at me and suddenly i knew i should fear him.

'W-what are y-you going to do about it/" I asked in fear as he turned and faced me. "Kill her." He whispered coldly as i suddenly lookes around. "Why do you want to do this?" I asked as i suddenly felt hand brush my neck. "I have to kill traders." He said dark;ly as i felt the hands grip my neck. "You've already ruined my life so go ahead kill me!" I choked out as i looked at the last sight before i died.  So this is how it ends? I die right when i help someone, and right when i found my true love....  I thought to myself as suddenly the pain ended. Was i alive or dead?

 

 

2 be continued! ok so wat do you think?Is she alive or dead? part 5 should be out soon! but thx 4 reading and it will get better!Next time i'll ake sure i add more details!thx~Destiny~ 

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