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Fallen Angel 2

Creative Created on 4-15-08 Views(60) Story Rating G

"Why did she have to do this!" My mom cried as i saw my body being loaded into the ambulance in hope of maybe saving my life. I was dead, and nobody could save me now! "Mom!Can you hear me!" I screamed loudly as she sobbed into my dad's cheast, his eyes gray and lifeless. "Mom!I'm alive" I shouted as she didnt even glance at me.

Why can't they hear me? I asked myself as i was blinded by a white light coming down from the pits below. "You are choosen as a Fallen Angel!" The voice bellowed as i cowered down afraid of what would happen if i spoke.

"You must do as all the others!You must take the lives of the innocent and if you do not you shall be killed and ripped from this world for enternity!" The voice yelled as i knew what had to be done. "Yes sir. I shall be the best." I vowed knowing my best was going to bring out the worst side of him.

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On April 26th 2008 KazWolf Said :
KazWolf awesome
On April 16th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 i like it kmp
On April 15th 2008 Slackee Said :
Slackee OOOOOHHH!
On April 15th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x ok and even though it's short, it's still good. plz kmp! :)
On April 15th 2008 feather1904 Said :
feather1904 srry its so short but the next one will be longer!