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Baseball Diamond

Creative Created on 4-5-08 Views(65) Story Rating G

"Let's go play sis!" Charity's 4 year old brother, Scrap(his nickname) said as he grabbed his brown,worn-out glove and headed out into the grassy,opened field. "Fine. But  only for a little bit cause i've got a baseball game." Charity said grabbing her glove and bat and head out into the breezy,cool afternoon. "But we have no baseball diamond." Scrap crestfallen,pointed out as he steppd into the lush,green,tall grass and looked around at the familair sights. "Sure we do! You have ome by the rusty,old can, second base at that weird tuff of brown grass, third base it at the old barn." She said her country accent getting the best of her as she pointed to every base , and inhale the sweet smell of mowed grass.

plz tell me what you think and if i should keep going!!! R/R/C plz! THX!! ~Destiny~

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On April 6th 2008 imnotgay90 Said :
imnotgay90 i like it. it sounds its gonna be very good. kmpp!-chris:)
On April 6th 2008 C4444 Said :
C4444 Different but sounds good kmp....
On April 5th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex kmp
On April 5th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Kmpppp =p
On April 5th 2008 Slackee Said :
Slackee Awesome! Kmp!
On April 5th 2008 feather1904 Said :
feather1904 plz R/R/C!!